Found

Found

A Poem by Nick Almanza
"

Gotta write this fast, just got out of the shower and am still driping ha sexy? maybe

"

This is where they found me

Face down

Dead

Wrists cut

Fallen in this pool of blood

My body cold

This is where they found me

With dry tears on my eyes

For that last moment of pain

Finally took me away

This blood stained bathroom floor

Heart broken

Life drained

 

What would anyone say?

Would they care?

"Just another emo s**t"

Thats what they would say

 

Fool

A boy who ran away from home

All  he caused was pain

All he found was pain

His death was a rightous one

Goodbye

© 2009 Nick Almanza


Author's Note

Nick Almanza
Sorry if its kinda sucky, just that i gotta hurry up, hmm maybe i should put some clothes on to haha
leave that up to you

My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Reviews

What a very deep and emotional and dark poem. You bring up alot of topics many people don't want to bring up.Nice job.

Posted 15 Years Ago


just got out of the shower...hm.. sexy.. hehe
well to start off,
i really liked the imagery in this poem, very descriptive and i could actually see eveything.
secondly, please dont ever do this... i know its just a poem and you have said you won't do any s**t like dat
but i worry about you and i love you.
thirdly, my favorite lines from this poem"with dry tears on his eyes" "life drained" because it shows how much your character cried and that he does have emotions, which pain seemed to be the dominant one
and that most of the blood was on the floor and he was obviously dead...
great poem...
i love you..
-ruth

Posted 15 Years Ago


dear holy speeding bullets, batman. I dig... madly and whole heartedly... I dig!

Posted 15 Years Ago



Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

90 Views
3 Reviews
Rating
Shelved in 1 Library
Added on April 9, 2009

Author

Nick Almanza
Nick Almanza

A small one. . . very small, CA



About
I dont really like expressing myself or talking bout me. .so here some songs! haha I really like the beat to this one more..

Writing