What is wrong?

What is wrong?

A Story by Nick Almanza

God what is wrong with this world? A lil girl found dead in a sutecase. God what the f**k! A little girl!  For godsakes man! And for what? Cause the parents couldnt take care of her? Is murder the only way to gout of our situations?

The sad reality is that no one cares. Everyone shall go back to work, Back to schools, Back to their world.  Its a shame really. Everyday someone dies around the world. With no reason at all they are killed. Yet no one stops and realizes it happning. Everyone goes back to having sex, Getting their money, Taking their drugs, And all other stupid reasons. Its all a shame

© 2009 Nick Almanza


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human beings are by nature... they do what benefits them. and the death of a young girl, sadly but true, only affects those who were once close to this child. Only a few people care about what truly matters, and people do go back to what they used to do, because only a few or no one is really heard. and you are right, the death of this young girl was unjustified, there was no real reason for this child to die just because her parents couldnt take care of her. there are other alternatives, like maybe a close family member could have taken care of her, or she could have been a foster child, but even if that happened, she wouldnt have the love of her parents ... idk.. life is confusing

Posted 15 Years Ago


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I couldn't agree more.. I feel the emotion of this you write.. it's sad that not many "seem" to care.. I mean how can these things happen to people? I am dumbfounded...

Posted 15 Years Ago


human beings are by nature... they do what benefits them. and the death of a young girl, sadly but true, only affects those who were once close to this child. Only a few people care about what truly matters, and people do go back to what they used to do, because only a few or no one is really heard. and you are right, the death of this young girl was unjustified, there was no real reason for this child to die just because her parents couldnt take care of her. there are other alternatives, like maybe a close family member could have taken care of her, or she could have been a foster child, but even if that happened, she wouldnt have the love of her parents ... idk.. life is confusing

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Nick Almanza
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I dont really like expressing myself or talking bout me. .so here some songs! haha I really like the beat to this one more..

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