woo!

This is actually me when im all alone. .or with my friends acting all cool and what not. .lol maybe not

 Woo!

Scream!

Dance!

The music is flowing through our bodies

See me walk in

In all my fly clothes

Pin stripe hat

Im the new cancer baby

Dressed in all black

Havent you heard it?

After i poped back into town?

So many years have gone by

Im not the man i was years ago

I see you

Watching me

Wondering who i am

How long ive been here

As i take all the ladies

A turn on the dance foor

Your reading my lips

As i speak to them

Still wondering

Who is he?

Well baby

Its me!

Now let me take you

Show you things i never could before

The music flowing through us

Feet never stoping

Arms always moving

The world melts around us

Its over

You said your goodbye

I said mine

Still you wondered

Who am i?

The man they never thought i could be

sorry

The night life beckons me

Reviews

[LisetteCanWrite!]

This is a mix I am getting from your writing.. the flow is pretty good.. you come across as wanting someone you love to think you are out having a great time and you do want to .. but she still comes to your mind.. and you wish you could take her dancing and show her a good time because you care but she let you go.. I think.. you definitely do have feelings and are torn.. love can have this affect... it can ravage the soul.. but no pain without love and no love without pain.. we all hurt when we are let go.. you are.. so sad.. I hope you have the courage to find real love again.. it is sooo much better than just surrendering to the night life! You can still take love out occassionally into the nightlife!!! Very great emotions you have shared here.. keep it up! =)

[ruth]

dance nick!!!
whoa!!!
no headbanging!!!
dance!!!
and smile!!!