Look me in my brand new eye

Something i thought out after staring at myself for hours. .I know eman is gonna hate the title ha

Dark,

Brown eyes

Almost pitch black

I love these eyes

Supernatural almost

I still remember

When these eyes

Where filled with light

When they saw everything

And just didnt care

Because i was lost in innocence

But now

It seems they have lost their light

Now all i see

Is cold,

Hard,

Black eyes,

Staring back at me

Who sees the world

Black as well

Look into my eyes

And see the forgotten,

Lost, child

Who didnt care,

About all the evil,

And help me set him free

Look me in my brand new eye

Reviews

[dixie]

very powerful piece!! splendid write. the way you have the piece presented is awsome. works well with reading it and feelin the dark story behind it.
very clever
~Dixie~