Words

Words

A Poem by Nick Almanza
"

Just a drunk a*****e

"

It was a lie wasnt it?

All those times you whispered

"I love you"

All those times you loved me

And kissed me

What was it for?

Was it jusy out of pity?

In the end

Were you just trying to love me?

You told me just to forget

Was that supposed to be a joke?

For you see

Unlike you

My love was true

So, Here you left me

Crying like a baby,

Without his mothers arms,

Writing words,

upon words,

Of drunken rage

Huging this bottle

Which seems to me my only friend

Of course it was all

Just a joke

Wasnt it?

Now here i am

Walking into this abyss called life

On my own

Only doing what i think is right

But in the end

Thats all we do

What we think is right

© 2009 Nick Almanza


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Wow ... real emotions here.. yes don't we all try to find reasoning when a relationship is over.. was it all a lie? The question that run through our heads when we are hurt.. when really the relationship may have just been wrong. Takes two in love to make it work .. I try to find the positive from each person in my life on all levels so that there are no regrets.. in the end I have a lesson I have learned to make me a better person... I have shed many tears... binge drank when I was younger when I was in pain .. no use it only hurts yourself in the end! Thank you for sharing your emotions and writing.. I think many will relate in these troubled times!!! =)

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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wow its not fake i dont think it is

Posted 15 Years Ago


Wow ... real emotions here.. yes don't we all try to find reasoning when a relationship is over.. was it all a lie? The question that run through our heads when we are hurt.. when really the relationship may have just been wrong. Takes two in love to make it work .. I try to find the positive from each person in my life on all levels so that there are no regrets.. in the end I have a lesson I have learned to make me a better person... I have shed many tears... binge drank when I was younger when I was in pain .. no use it only hurts yourself in the end! Thank you for sharing your emotions and writing.. I think many will relate in these troubled times!!! =)

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wow... hey, did u really get drunk? what inspired u to write this? very emotional

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Added on March 22, 2009

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Nick Almanza
Nick Almanza

A small one. . . very small, CA



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I dont really like expressing myself or talking bout me. .so here some songs! haha I really like the beat to this one more..

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