I'm Juliet

This kinda scared me. It's so unlike me. My sweetie, if you see this, I really do love you.

I'm Juliet
Poem ( Rap, maybe? ) By CompellingComposer ( Or Double C? )

Romeo, oh Romeo
Where for art thou, Romeo?
I’m here all alone
And far away you had to go

You know what?
Forget that crap
No classical stuff this time
This is more like a rap
Cuz’ I feel like that Cinderella chic
Sittin’ round, waiting, not doin’ nothin’
But you know what?
I’m about to show you somethin’!

He’s like Romeo
And I’m his freaking Juliet
We’re so far apart
But I aint done yet!
We ever seen each other?
No!
Strictly stuck to on the phone!
Oh, yeah, and Facebook, too
But what can I do?
His dad finds out, he’s dead
Try to see him? My mom would rip off my head
And his as well!
Dang, aint that swell?

Romeo, get you’re you-know-what over here
You offended?
I’m sorry, dear
But I’m just kinda ticked
Our relationship is only this!
I didn’t know this is what I picked!
I love you, don’t get me wrong
But this poem, ( or maybe a song? )
Is just how I secretly feel
Yep, honey, this is way too real
I love you, I want that kiss
But I’m stuck home, on my own
And it’s you I miss!

Juliet dies in the end, right?
Is that how I’m gonna end up,
Who I’m gonna be?
And you chasin’ after me?
Find then, I guess we’ll see
Romeo and Juliet
Huh, I guess that’s me.

Reviews

[KAREN]

This was plain out GOOD! Love to hear music to it!
100/100

[OT]

haha! nice!! yes quite rap like indeed 'CC' - well written and structured - the rhymes were spot on, and you held me interested throughout!! nice stuff!