Mother

Mother

A Poem by CompellingComposer
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UGH, I really needed to vent!

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Mother
You make me want to scream!
Mother
I can’t even escape to my dreams!
Mother
I just want to break someone’s face!
Mother
From you is there anywhere I’m safe?!
Mother
Is this some stupid game?!
Mother
You’re driving me insane!
Mother
What else can I say?!
Mother
I WANT TO GET AWAY!

© 2010 CompellingComposer


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I couldn't sleep, so I thought I'd review some of your writing.

This is very intense! Especially with the font sizes. Your use of them show how emphatic your feelings are. Mom's can be like that sometime. I hope it's only temporary. Yet, I realize how much you want to be free.
I like it because you're able to vent, which is good.

Posted 13 Years Ago


I can dig this piece.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on December 27, 2010
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My name is Megan and I have been writing poems since 4th grade and stories since 6th. I'm very, very young, as I've noticed from the ages of my fellow writers on this site. Yes, I am only 13, but writ.. more..

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