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Corrupt to the core

Are you ready for more?

Anything negative feels correct

Because it condones the regrets

But I’m here now

And I’ve felt the same in the past

You’re not the only one to crash

Accpt me as I’ve done for you

Arms open, love unconditional

I’m not what you expect

A bit unconventional

If I beg will you let me change your color from blue to…?

If I beg will you make my struggle mean something?

I want you for reasons you can’t see in the mirror

I want to show you that I can be loving

Reviews

[Emily B]

bring it on

[ChaoticSoul]

I agree, this has a very nice flow. It illustrates the frustration of the moment in the chase and pursuit of love. You have a good choice of words as well. This poem has the ability to relate on a universal level and that shows how well written it is. Nice job!

[Stef Outsiders]

WOW! this is really good!! the flow is perfect...