My Persephone

You’re my constant companion

My angel and demon

You give me motivation

When my rhyme is without reason

You gave my life more season

A zest, a bit more zing

You woke me from a coma

I feel like a human being

With a dash of supernatural

I could fly with demon’s wings

You conjure my emotion

Like a devil from hell’s rings

I’d call you Messiah

But I am still damned

However my time in hell

Is going better than planned

You are my Persephone

The glow in my gloom

Though there is no sunshine

You find some way to bloom

Reviews

[KeeD]

Man you killed it, insane piece. Love this. Ain't no girl as beautiful as a one that can survive the eternity of hell. The glow in my gloom, you make words beautiful brother.

[Commanda Panda]

Thank you for reading.

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Beautiful work of art!~xoxo~

[Baby Ricochet]

So you're Hades in this. .......................

[Commanda Panda]

Nope. I'm Commanda Panda. I killed Hades and stole his s**t.

[KeeD]

Damn straight, my man.

[Emily B]

I like this! Much better than your works about putting it to, well, let's just say, this is sweet and lovely, suits your pretty face much better than your usual stuff

[TL Boehm]

this is actually a lovely and tender poem and pays wonderful homage to the original myth. love that last line about finding a way to bloom.

[Commanda Panda]

Thanks. It isn't my usual style, but sometimes you have to switch it up.