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This One Has No Title

A Poem by Commanda Panda

God, not again.
In public I pretend.
I can smile, I can dance,
But I can never mend.
I try hard to cope the best I can,
But failure is the trend.
Everyone has their own s**t.
No one has a hand to lend.
Every day I bend back further
And fight the urge to break.
I wonder if it's for myself
Or someone else's sake.
Sometimes I get the shakes
From maintaining self-control,
But my actions are worth nothing
In a world of empty souls.

© 2013 Commanda Panda


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riveting. I feel like this often but there is something within that just keeps us going. Well done.

Posted 11 Years Ago


I very well enjoyed it, thank you

Posted 11 Years Ago


We all have our demons. Good poem

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Commanda Panda is a screenwriter and owner of indie film company Commanda Panda Productions. At one time he was more of a poet and lyric writer, but now he only writes poems and lyrics from time to ti.. more..

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