Suspended

Suspended

A Poem by Commanda Panda

I sit in darkness waiting to be fully consumed by something.

Limbo has gone on for too long.

First I let myself be swallowed by darkness,

But it regurgitated me.

Then I let myself bake in the brightness of light,

But it cooled and went away.

Now here, caught in the realm of dusk,

I wonder why this torture continues.

I excel wherever I am, so why hasn't a side chosen me?

© 2013 Commanda Panda


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this isn't schoolyard touch football, You have to choose the side

it is all up to you, choose wisely

Posted 11 Years Ago


Commanda Panda

11 Years Ago

I choose my own side
Emily B

11 Years Ago

just as i expected you would :)

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Added on September 19, 2013
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Commanda Panda is a screenwriter and owner of indie film company Commanda Panda Productions. At one time he was more of a poet and lyric writer, but now he only writes poems and lyrics from time to ti.. more..

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