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A Poem by Commanda Panda

I'm the man with madness at your disposal.

Let's take a seat and I'll make a proposal.

I like you a lot and don't want you to go, so

Sign a contract in blood and say bye to the bozos.

You've known a lot of guys, but none on my level.

The deal that we make could be one with a devil.

But I can tell you for sure that this one isn't Satan.

I'll be sure to reward you for the risks that you've taken.

Come closer to me until we touch tenderly

And I can corrupt you mentally and physically.

The chaos can't be erased, but you relieve me of anger,

And it makes me consider a ring on your finger.

© 2013 Commanda Panda


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Dye
What girl hasn't wanted to be corrupted mentally or physically at some point in her life? I think we all have LOL. Nothing wrong with that. Sounds like a sweet proposal.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Seriously, what woman could turn down an offer like this? Corruption, a ring, and good old fashioned wheeling and dealing? But seriously, deep down, I think every woman does want to be rewarded for the risks she has taken with her heart. I wonder how many ever get it?

Posted 11 Years Ago


Commanda Panda

11 Years Ago

.5 % of all women will get their heart's desire. The real question you should be asking is are you o.. read more
Or a ring in your nose...

Posted 11 Years Ago


Commanda Panda

11 Years Ago

Not a big fan of nose piercings. lol

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Added on August 7, 2013
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Tags: love, marriage, relationship, ring, touch, sex

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Commanda Panda is a screenwriter and owner of indie film company Commanda Panda Productions. At one time he was more of a poet and lyric writer, but now he only writes poems and lyrics from time to ti.. more..

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