The Lessers

The Lessers

A Poem by Commanda Panda

Itching from these microbes. Itching from the fleas.

Everything’s so small and annoying.

I only hear a whisper as you try to scream.

Crushing cockroaches beneath my feet.

Stop with your foolish prattle. Stop crawling over me!

Find another host because I no longer bleed.

© 2013 Commanda Panda


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Stop with your foolish prattle. Stop crawling over me!

Find another host because I no longer bleed.

FORMIDABLE. It amazes me that the smallest creatures in sufficient numbers can kill. I'd rather be eaten by a lion than sucked dry by parasites. Parasites that can infest you with even smaller things "microbes" that multiply and kill you slowly. And so it is with certain people....

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Reminds me of the sand fleas and no see ums on parris island.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Commanda Panda

11 Years Ago

I actually haven't been there. But I have been to monster island to see Godzilla.
Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

I was there for 13 long, sweaty, terrifying, exilerating weeks
Stop with your foolish prattle. Stop crawling over me!

Find another host because I no longer bleed.

FORMIDABLE. It amazes me that the smallest creatures in sufficient numbers can kill. I'd rather be eaten by a lion than sucked dry by parasites. Parasites that can infest you with even smaller things "microbes" that multiply and kill you slowly. And so it is with certain people....

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Commanda Panda is a screenwriter and owner of indie film company Commanda Panda Productions. At one time he was more of a poet and lyric writer, but now he only writes poems and lyrics from time to ti.. more..

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