Potty Mouth

Potty Mouth

A Poem by Commanda Panda

I'm a space psycho, if you know what I mean.
I'll put my hand down your throat and pull out your spleen.
You can call me a criminal. You can call me a fiend,
But the enlightened all know I'm not really obscene.
You don't have to embrace me if you and I don't agree,
But you hypocrites said this country was free.
I'll say anything I want with middle fingers erect.
If you don't like it, too bad. It's already taken effect.
You react to my action giving fuel to the flame.
I've jaded your thoughts now that you're cursing my name.

© 2013 Commanda Panda


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This is adorable! I'm not sure you can pull one's spleen out by simply putting your hand down one's throat but...great imagery xD

Ha...free my a*s...I listen to a radio station that bleeps out "...f**king lonely..." in a Green Day song. F**king tragic.

You. Me. F**k, dude... ;-)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Commanda Panda

11 Years Ago

Last sentence, great idea.
KAOlmsted

11 Years Ago

...just saying ;-)
haha I always have enjoyed your potty mouth because then I don't have to :P
Leave the sex stuff to me
and let the profanities to you:)

Well done, Mr. Panda!

Posted 11 Years Ago


yes, sir

yes, sir :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


You know you're a bad influence on me, like I needed any more. F*****g awesome man

Posted 11 Years Ago


nice

Posted 11 Years Ago


I'm an alligator... I'm a mama-papa coming for you.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

I'm a space invader. I'll be a rock n roll b***h for you
Commanda Panda

11 Years Ago

I'm not sure if either of you are threatening me or coming on to me. lol

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Added on June 14, 2013
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Commanda Panda is a screenwriter and owner of indie film company Commanda Panda Productions. At one time he was more of a poet and lyric writer, but now he only writes poems and lyrics from time to ti.. more..

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