By Night

By Night

A Poem by Commanda Panda

She comes here nightly

She says to cuddle

I don’t believe her

I’m not befuddled

After dusk

She’s in all her glory

And in the morning

Wounds on my neck tell a story

I know she’s older

Than early thirties

But she’s still limber

And she’s still dirty

I’m still her prey

Though she’s beneath me

And tonight she promises

I’ll die sweetly

© 2013 Commanda Panda


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Me likey!

Reminds me of "Kiss of Shadows" by Laurel K. Hamilton. I think you would enjoy it ;0

It has fantasy.
It has story.
It has sex.
It has demons.
It has angels.

:)

Miss your sweet honesty, Panda!

Posted 11 Years Ago


dysfunction anybody?

love it

Posted 11 Years Ago


Make a crucifix out of Garlic sticks from olive garden with a gun site on top that squirts holy water and a*s f**k her with it.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Commanda Panda

11 Years Ago

What if the crucifix burns me, too? This is going to be a looooong dysfunctional relationship.
Enjoyed reading...nicely penned...:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Commanda Panda

11 Years Ago

Thank you, Syber Rose.

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Commanda Panda is a screenwriter and owner of indie film company Commanda Panda Productions. At one time he was more of a poet and lyric writer, but now he only writes poems and lyrics from time to ti.. more..

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