Suicide Mission

Suicide Mission

A Poem by Commanda Panda

Everything’s a no-go.

Grab another bottle.

Everything is frozen

And I need to hit the throttle.

But I’ve hit a new low

And lost everything of import.

I want to see oblivion

With the devil as my escort.

Cheap liquor,

Cheaper women.

I’ve lost sight of my goal

And I see in double vision.

I’m becoming apathetic to a

Deteriorating condition.

I welcome self-destruction

On this suicide mission.

© 2013 Commanda Panda


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Cheap liquor
Cheaper women -- reminds me of that one Don Henley song, the title escapes my mind at the moment.

This was very lyrical, and I quite liked it.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Commanda Panda

11 Years Ago

I like you. You're pretty.
Girl Friday (Sarah W.)

11 Years Ago

Aaaww...thank you :) I've always been fond of pandas too
Commanda Panda

11 Years Ago

Should you ever get the urge to hug me, I might gnaw on your hair like bamboo.
"Cheap liquor cheaper women" Oh yeah.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Commanda Panda

11 Years Ago

The American dream, my friend.
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Powerful, flowed superbly....enjoyed!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Commanda Panda

11 Years Ago

Thanks.

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Added on June 1, 2013
Last Updated on June 1, 2013
Tags: suicide, alcohol, sad, depressed, lose, loser, death, devil

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Commanda Panda
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Commanda Panda is a screenwriter and owner of indie film company Commanda Panda Productions. At one time he was more of a poet and lyric writer, but now he only writes poems and lyrics from time to ti.. more..

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