Inertia

Inertia

A Poem by Commanda Panda

I’m alone (so alone)
 Falling apart at the seams 
What defines me
 Are shards of my broken dreams
 I can’t remember my smile 
Or when I use to sing
 How come no one can relate 
Or get what I mean? 
It’s like the world is my stage 
And everybody’s a prop 
Time out for a second! 
Why can’t the faking stop? 
Inertia takes hold and there’s no turning back 
Once you’ve left your spot you can’t get where you were at
 Your family and friends will never be the same 
And once they’re dead or gone no one cares about your name

© 2013 Commanda Panda


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i predict you will be a star at the writer's café, every one will know your name

Posted 11 Years Ago


Emily B

11 Years Ago

et tu, panda?

already been called that dirty name once this week
Commanda Panda

11 Years Ago

It's only dirty if you don't bathe.
Emily B

11 Years Ago

ha ha ha
We are never alone, Commanda Panda.

We are all "Indie Film" creeps:P We all love it, and we know it!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on June 1, 2013
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Tags: dead, death, gone, alone, sad, broken, fake

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Commanda Panda
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Commanda Panda is a screenwriter and owner of indie film company Commanda Panda Productions. At one time he was more of a poet and lyric writer, but now he only writes poems and lyrics from time to ti.. more..

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