Inevitable

Driven to loathe.

Driven to madness.

Pushed to the limit.

Finally had it.

Prayed for one thing.

Didn’t get greedy.

Desperation.

Feeling so needy.

Begged to be loved.

End up abandoned.

Seeing the feast,

But feeling the famine.

Don’t want to be happy,

Just wanted contentment.

Leaning towards bitter

And endless resentment.

Reviews

[Emily B]

I've got nothing

maybe i need some coffee, couldn't even fart a rainbow

[Commanda Panda]

A skittles enema should help you fart that rainbow.

[Vria P Crow]

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1. Bitter resentment is something I am currently going through. haha Us innmates gotta stick together! :P

2. Let me know if my style bothers you. I am blunt, and would stop.


l o a t h i n g

Loathing is a tragic flaw.

[Commanda Panda]

1. I am not and never have been an inmate unless you count this planet as a prison.
2. It is not my place to tell another writer to change their style. I value unique personalities.

[Vria P Crow]

1. Oh wow. I commend you. I committed myself to get some professional help for my issues.
2. Right on!

[Commanda Panda]

There's nothing wrong with asking for help. However, when the help tries to change who you are and make you like everyone else then it's time for a rebellion.

[Vria P Crow]

LMAO HAHAHA Oh yeah. Ummm...I kinda did that to a certain extent.

[Vria P Crow]

Oh, and for future reference:D If there is private things you need to talk about. Send me a private message. I don't get back to people quick, but I normally will.

[Commanda Panda]

Why hide? If there's any private YOU need to talk about send me a private message.

[Vria P Crow]

:)

[Commanda Panda]

I don't judge, but I may point and laugh at times.

[Vria P Crow]

You are the PC to my Mac
in the nerd sack;
please cut me some slack.

[Vria P Crow]

haha That is from my boy pick up lines.
Yes, do not judge.
Independent thinking.

[Vria P Crow]

Don't be so gross. I have no idea how old you are. Therefore, I apologize.

[Commanda Panda]

Exactly when was I gross? I thought we were being intellectual; especially since you mentioned Macs and PCs.

[Vria P Crow]

haha I have a complex. Read my work. You will learn I project something fierce.

[Vria P Crow]

MACs= female
PC= male

[Commanda Panda]

We're all QWERTY when it comes to our keyboards.

[Vria P Crow]

lmao haha QWERTY!