Transform my Thoughts into a CanvasA Poem by ComatoseHelp me
to transform my thoughts into a canvas, Maybe
then my emotions will become clear. The
words never seem to embody what I wish to say, The
phrases always fall short of their intentions. The harmony of the rhymes collide, And run together like the pigments of a ruined painting. So hard
I try to unify the colors, To
perfect each and every stroke of the brush. I wish
only to illustrate my passion, To display how deeply and helplessly in love I have fallen. So help
me to rectify this misshapen mess of acrylic and oils, To take
my brush of tongues and somehow create a masterpiece. For you,
my love, deserve nothing less. © 2016 ComatoseAuthor's Note
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1 Review Added on October 26, 2011 Last Updated on February 13, 2016 AuthorComatoseTwin Falls, IDAboutI write poetry and stories, which is obviously why I'm on this site. I just want some good criticisim and other people's thoughts on my writing style, simple as that. more..Writing
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