GoodbyeA Poem by ComatoseI don't have to put up with this anymore.Goodbye old, familiar room. Where feelings are hacked and hearts are strewn. Goodbye soft, comforting bed. Where love was whispered and hatred spread. Goodbye warm, ragged chair. Where lies were told and laughs were shared. Goodbye worn and faithful table. Where once was fair and cherished fable. Goodbye fingers warm and strong Pointing in ways decietful and wrong Goodbye warm and calming embrace Malice hidden in colloquy and lace Goodbye pretty words of lust Seducer of hope and betrayer of trust Goodbye eyes of enthralling blue The act of innocence now seen right through Goodbye excuses always stalled Goodbye forever, goodbye all. © 2016 Comatose |
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3 Reviews Added on March 13, 2011 Last Updated on February 13, 2016 AuthorComatoseTwin Falls, IDAboutI write poetry and stories, which is obviously why I'm on this site. I just want some good criticisim and other people's thoughts on my writing style, simple as that. more..Writing
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