Perfectly ImperfectA Poem by ComatoseValentines sucksA charm lies concealed within a face Oh so imperfectly beheld. The older dare not lift his veil For fear it be dispelled. But she peers beyond his mesh, And wishes, yet denies, Lest voices awaken a want That image only dreams to satisfy. He is but moderate to outward view as many often seem to be; His etherealness even I never knew until he bestowed his smile upon me. That fortuitious day, those opportune
words, Entranced me within eyes of a virescent hue. Consumed within melodies of nectarous
laughter, Propelling my resolve and emotions askew. Those eyes now whisper of love unsurpassed, And his smile portrays a beauty unfathomed. My soul aches
to be contiguous with his, Like the
strings of a guitar yearning to be strummed. The smallest of things permeate me with joy. His ambitions, his affection and mirth, They only attest to my growing certainty; That I am the most fortunate woman upon this
earth. © 2016 Comatose |
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1 Review Added on February 14, 2011 Last Updated on February 13, 2016 AuthorComatoseTwin Falls, IDAboutI write poetry and stories, which is obviously why I'm on this site. I just want some good criticisim and other people's thoughts on my writing style, simple as that. more..Writing
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