How Beautiful You AreA Poem by ComatoseHow
Beautiful You Are The low
winter sun shines through your hair: Giving
you the pretense of an unearthly glow, Like a
wreath of fire about your head. You
build within me a warmth of flame, A
burning licking and spreading through my chest, A
scorching, searing, blackening rush That
threatens to turn me to mere ash where I stand. It takes
time for wood to catch fire in snow, But once
it's burning, the inclement ice melts All
around it, leaving the grass beneath charred On still
solid soil. The frost reddens and
roughens your knuckles. Freckles dance brown across
the backs of your hands. What strong fingers you
have Long and broad, and thickened
from fights. There are splashes of ink, Like Fairy wings, Flying down the crease
between your thumb and index finger. A line of hardened, pale
skin Crosses each of your palms, The bruise down your ring
finger Is purpling. Your
smile is like sunshine amongst storm clouds, Your
deep laugh rumbles Through
your body and it seemingly shakes Into my body as well, and it brings to me The sweetest
and purest feeling of life. The skin
around your eyes Shrinks
and pushes close together Creasing
your beautiful skin as you grin, Just the
sight makes my fingertips tingle ever so slightly, And I
can’t prevent the shy smile that ghosts my lips. Your
neck tilts down and forwards, All your
attention is on your friends, and their’s on you. I want
to be the focus of that face. What I
wouldn’t give to be the reason for that smile, To take from them what I would kill to have. Your
back is lean, strong and straight as the pine trees Clustering
up the canyon sides all round us, You lean
your beautiful head On your
pale, firm forearms on the scorched wood Casually
rocking forward on your toes towards the edge of the steep rocks Overlooking
the canyon A
faraway look sets in your eyes, as though there’s something there Something
wonderous, something just out of our reach, That
only you can see. No hue
of any emerald could ever wish to compare To the
captivating glow of your eyes Framed
by thick amber lashes Which I
have seen wetted with tears, but only once. No
summer day is as warm as your gaze Cast
upon those for whom you care, Nor icy
lake as cold as the looks You send
to those who would dare to harm them. Your
well treaded feet, The pale
skin exposed at your ankle, The
knotted muscle of your calf, The
sharp lines of your knee, Those
thick, strong thighs All made
only to perfect the soft curves of your waist, The stomach
of perfectly outlined muscles, The skin
on your arms painted lightly with freckles, Flawlessly
covering the strengh that runs just beneath them The
chest that breaths evenly, Rising,
falling…living. Arms
which only encircle me in secret, Delicate
lips that sing out the sweetest of words, Lips
that I cannot help but long to cover with my own A face
that I long to trace with my finger, The high
cheekbones, the strong jawline, the perfect nose. This is
what I see. This is
how beautiful you are. © 2016 ComatoseReviews
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2 Reviews Added on January 28, 2011 Last Updated on February 13, 2016 AuthorComatoseTwin Falls, IDAboutI write poetry and stories, which is obviously why I'm on this site. I just want some good criticisim and other people's thoughts on my writing style, simple as that. more..Writing
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