Poem of the end

Poem of the end

A Poem by Comatose
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Showers of spring
Shadows fall
Tear stained cheeks
A ravens call
Blood on the earth
The sun gone
A friendship broken
A shattered bond
Two orbs of blue meet their equal
Anger, hatred, pain, surprise
Love, longing, and regret
Emotions clear in two sets of eyes
Black against red
Revenge from dreams
Family and Friends
Dreams torn at the seams
This is all they know
This is what they share
This is how without words
They know the other cares
All that separates them
All that will bring them to the end
All that keeps...
A friend from a friend.

© 2016 Comatose


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Added on June 5, 2010
Last Updated on February 12, 2016

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Comatose
Comatose

Twin Falls, ID



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I write poetry and stories, which is obviously why I'm on this site. I just want some good criticisim and other people's thoughts on my writing style, simple as that. more..

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