Swimming Through Sick Lullabies

Swimming Through Sick Lullabies

A Poem by Comatose

I lay entranced,
Cradled within your arms.
Unable to move,
Unable to speak.

I gaze in wonder at your eyes.
How could anything be so beautiful?
Their green reflects my face,
Staring back into them, lacking expression.

I listen to your words,
So soft...so comforting.
I wish to listen to them forever,
Though they make no sense to my hungry ears.

You begin to sing a lullaby,
Or is it just your words slurring together?
It doesn't matter, they are beautiful.
You are beautiful.

The edges of my vision begin to fade,
Like they do before a dream.
But this dream is going to be special...
For this dream shall never end.

I can feel little droplets on my face,
Is it raining?
Well, that is alright,
For it is a warm rain.

And as I slowly drift away,
I can feel my hand lift up,
And caress your face...
Just one last time....

I feel as though I'm beginning to swim,
Swimming through nothingness,
Through your lullaby,
Through a feeling of peace.

I am aware of my lips moving,
Uttering one last word,
The one thing in this world I will miss...

.
And I begin swimming...
Swimming through Sick Lullabies...

© 2018 Comatose


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wow...this is amazing...i know i say it alot but it is true..you are an amazing writer I can't wait for more :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


Wow this is a really good poem brought out some feeling in me- Thanks for sharing

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Comatose
Comatose

Twin Falls, ID



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