Never Have I Fallen

Never Have I Fallen

A Poem by Comatose

Your lips speak sweet nothings
Your touch a cool caress
I am lost in your magic,

My heart beats within your chest

I think of you every morning
And dream of you each night
I think of your arms holding me,

And cannot help but feel it’s right.

Never before have I fallen
But I am quickly on my way
You hold a heart within your hands
That has never before been given away

© 2010 Comatose


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Comatose
Randomocity ^^

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Joe
I really like this poem. It has strong emotions and great word choice. Great job! Keep it up!

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Comatose
Comatose

Twin Falls, ID



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