A Rose

A Rose

A Poem by Comatose
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Just a starter poem...nothing significant.

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The red rose whispers of passion,
And the white rose breathes of love;
So the red rose is a falcon,
And the white rose is a dove.
But I send you a cream-white rosebud
With a flush on its petal tips;
For the love that is purest and sweetest
Has a kiss of desire on the lips.

© 2010 Comatose


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Comatose
I know it's not that great, but it's just for now; I'll get my better ones up soon.

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this is an amazing piece.... i love it

Posted 14 Years Ago


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Joe
This is a really great poem. The imagery is really good and it screams romance. Great job!

Posted 14 Years Ago


I love it! omg lol this is great. I can't wait until you put your others on here:)

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on January 28, 2010
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Comatose
Comatose

Twin Falls, ID



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I write poetry and stories, which is obviously why I'm on this site. I just want some good criticisim and other people's thoughts on my writing style, simple as that. more..

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