A RoseA Poem by ComatoseJust a starter poem...nothing significant.
The red rose whispers of passion,
And the white rose breathes of love; So the red rose is a falcon, And the white rose is a dove. But I send you a cream-white rosebud With a flush on its petal tips; For the love that is purest and sweetest Has a kiss of desire on the lips. © 2010 ComatoseAuthor's Note
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3 Reviews Added on January 28, 2010 Last Updated on February 1, 2010 AuthorComatoseTwin Falls, IDAboutI write poetry and stories, which is obviously why I'm on this site. I just want some good criticisim and other people's thoughts on my writing style, simple as that. more..Writing
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