Queen of Suns

Careful, the ending is a bit....hot....

Queen of Suns

A Poem by Colton Warr 

A kiss from the sun, oh how well it burns 

And for the next, oh how my lips yearn 

Her Solar Flares have scorched through the ice

Forever destined to float through space, oh how the tables turn 

A kiss from the sun, oh how well it soothes

And the blood within my veins, oh how it moves

I am caught within her gravity's pull and still feel safe

But tell me how it is, that a ball of fire's surface is so smooth? 

A kiss from the sun, oh how well it stings 

And perhaps I will travel to Saturn and present, to the sun, a ring 

Would the sun ever decide to spend the rest of her life with a man who was cold? 

If I had her love, only then, would I feel like a king 

A kiss from the sun, oh how well it sears 

At times, as her lips peel from mine, I am moved to tears 

What on earth could ever compare to her flame?

I want to melt away with her for the rest of my years 

                               *****

Her hair pours like fire from her head 

I noticed it all the way from the moon 

To be rotting here so far from her is the one thing I dread

I pray to the stars and cosmos that I can kiss her soon

 

Her smile illuminates even the darkest corners of space

I see it calling from a corner of my own 

I want to go to it and disappear with her without a trace 

The starlight, the cosmos, the heavens are all things that, to me, she has shown 

                              *****

I have been kissed by the sun, oh, have I ever

How did I breathe, how did I live, before I met her

The Sun and The Moon together, oh what beauty

Every flare and ember from her I will forever treasure 

A Moon, I was, thought to be lost within space

But saved, I have been, by the absolute glow of her face 

The shine of her smile pulls me in to stay awhile

A Moon with nowhere to be, I have now found my place

I have been kissed by the sun, oh, how I have

There must be a God, how did I find her without a map?

And I never want to go back, her warmth feels like home 

Can someone thank this God for her, on my behalf 

A Sun, she is, a queen of warmth and fire

But enraptured, she has made me, every flame I do admire

The taste of her lips has me in full eclipse 

I want The Queen of Suns until her heat expires 

                               ****

My whispers turn your glow into a red, rampant rage of fire 

They speak of how I wish to not stop until you tire 

The moans, the hands gripping and grasping, you clutch anything you can 

The Sun and the Moon making love, I can hear heavens choir 

My hands gripping your waist as I thrust, pull and push at you 

We make a mess all over the solar system, oh what a view 

I don't stop, I don't quit, my insertion has you seeing stars 

My tongue dances along the suns neck, how I adore her, if only she knew 

My lips carefully caressing The Suns back as I pull her fiery hair 

I bring her eyes close to mine, so while I'm in her, we can stare 

She's getting close now, as her moans enter my mouth 

I go deeper as she explodes for me, what an interstellar affair

Author's Note

More words to come...

Reviews

[Wandervogel]

wow sir.....what an expression

[Rache David]

It's kind of erotic!! :); and quite expressive. However, I just think that the moon was unjustifiably used. You said at the last line "what an interstellar affair." Perhaps, I hoped that the moon too was given justice.
Anyhow. Good piece. :)

[Deidara]

I don't even know where to begin. You are very talented and have found your voice. All that's left is to run with it and never stop. Keep up the incredible work!

[Connor Shane]

Well this is an interesting take on the sun and moon. That last part was... Spicy, heh. But it was a nice, heartfelt poem! Well done!

[chaotic katie]

You've created a cosmic masterpiece. Very well penned.

[Gypsy Warrior Queen]

was a boy, kissed a girl, hung the moon, loved a queen...does it get any better?

[Colton Warr]

No it does not! Thank you so much for giving this a read! I appreciate you taking the time to do so!

[Judy Emery/ Lilly Emery]

Your poem reached deeply in my heart, words I could or never known I could feel. Thank you so much for sharing your beauty in your poem of true talent. I loved it very much.

[Colton Warr]

Thank you very much, Lilly! I appreciate your kind words! I am glad I could move you in such ways! That is one of the biggest compliments to a writer, in my humble opinion. Thanks for reading!

[Chris Shaw]

Stunning lines of poetry. Pleased I called on your page.

Chris

[Colton Warr]

Thank you so much, Christine! I appreciate your kind words! Thanks for giving this a read!

[MoonChildPoetry]

this is so visionary! absolutely stunning! the comparison of woman to son, man to moon.. blew my mind. cant wait to read more from you. youre a beautiful writer.

[Colton Warr]

Thank you very much, my friend! I appreciate the kind words! I have a collection of poetry coming out this week! You will receive a read request! Thanks for reading!

[MoonChildPoetry]

im excited! cant wait to read

[A. Kim Spradling]

I am amazed! This is very beautiful. I love the comparison of a woman to the sun. Wow. This was a beautiful read.