A Night's Fog

I am lost within the Night...

A Nights Fog
A Poem by Colton Warr

One more shot until the world spins
What dust has been kicked up by my actions?
Tonight I just can't seem to think
If you'd like to exit just tell me when

One more place before this all ends
A bunch of night owls, just me and my friends
You've come to say that we are on the brink?
I'm here to declare, rules are meant to suffer bends

One more kiss before I die, please
And then look at this iPhone and say cheese
Let's document it all before we sink
And fall down underneath the palm trees

One more night before we all cease
If you need warmth I can become your fleece
And did you catch that? At you, I sent a wink
This night will forever hold of me, a piece

Reviews

[Kaylee April]

I like the rhythm in this. I can really imagine how this unfolded. Great poem overall.

[Colton Warr]

Thank you very much for your kind words! I'm glad you enjoyed this one! Thanks for giving this a read!

[Valentine]

Must have that last selfie or picture. Sink or swim. Valentine

[Colton Warr]

Exactly. Such an interesting thing in our society. It's crazy how it's changed in just the last ten years. Thank you very much for reading this!

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

I want to be one of the night owls, ah the troubles ahead! Well done, good read.

[Colton Warr]

Haha by all means, join the flock! I'm always down to get into some trouble with new people! Thanks for giving this a read! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

[Irenic]

One more shot until the world spins
What dust has been kicked up by my actions?
Tonight I just can't seem to think
If you'd like to exit just tell me when

epic lines!!!!!!!!!!!!:)

[Colton Warr]

Thank you very much!! I'm glad you found these lines epic! Thank you, as always, for giving this a read! Your words are always kind!

[Irenic]

welcome..............:)

[Gabija]

loved it! keep going, dude. :)

[Colton Warr]

Thank you very much!! I'm glad you enjoyed this one! Sorry for the late response. Thanks for giving this a read!