The Suns Interlude

The sun always finds a way....

The Suns Interlude
A Poem by Colton Warr

I spoke to the sun today
What poured from her head were golden rays
The wind played gently with the curls
I wish I was the wind, if I must say

I witnessed her fire, I saw her blaze
What exploded from her eyes had me locked within a daze
The stars and planets all long to be hers
If I could just be as close as the clouds, forever there I would stay

I heard her voice burn through my ears
The constant heat of it subdued all of my fears
No wonder everyone wants to be scorched
If she is solar I would be content with burning for years

I shared a kiss with the sun today
What it did to me was block my airway
The heat from her lips left me breathless
Now I do nothing but wish it was sunny everyday

I envy the clouds for they are closer to you than I
And, oh, what I'd give to join you in the sky
To be forever close to your energy, I care not if I fry
They say no human can get this close to the great fire...but I can still try

Reviews

[ManasaC]

This is beautiful and very well penned. Beautiful personification of the sun. Good Job!

[Colton Warr]

Thank you so much, my friend! I appreciate your kind words and I am glad that you enjoyed this one! Thank you for giving this a read! Peace to you!

[ManasaC]

You are welcome!

[Bear]

Your romantic nature has shined in the last two of your poems I have read, it has me wondering if something or someone has sparked a flame inside you and it is about to turn into a raging blaze of interest :~)
Standing Ovation! Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap!

[Colton Warr]

Thank you so very much, my friend! Your deduction is correct! However, both poems are dedicated to two different women. Both of which may never read these two pieces. I'm still mulling over the idea of sending it to one of them :) we'll see! Thank you, again, for giving this a read! Your support is encouraging!

[Bear]

Be warned that playing with two love interest at the same time will not only make you old before your time but if found out could end your life before you get old :~)

[Colton Warr]

Haha this is very true! Trust me, I have no intention on playing two women. I'm too old fashioned for that game. It would make for some excellent writing material, though! :)