The Unspoken

A dedication to a girl that may never read this...

The Unspoken
A Poem by Colton Warr

What is thy bidding, my dark haired princess?
Just name the place and I'll be present in an instant
What if you did? Just breathe my name into the air
And send with it an invitation but only if you dare

Your beauty has slowly dripped all over my feed
Now, to meet you is something that I need
I can't explain it, I seem to be broken
Can I speak to you what is never spoken?

What is thy wish, my living dream?
For you are tearing my heart at its very seam
Would you take a chance and reach out for my hand?
And do these things that I humbly command?

I long to know you, I long for a taste
For us to collide, perhaps you should brace
Only one chance is all that I desire
And, doll, nothing else will you ever require

And what if we did it? Let's kill the games
Bury the corpses along with the shame
I know you're wild and I do not wish to tame
I just want to be the one that you claim

Reviews

[Fate]

"Your beauty has slowly dripped all over my feed
Now, to meet you is something that I need
I can't explain it, I seem to be broken
Can I speak to you what is never spoken? "
these lines are well written..Lovely! :)
I love your work! and I'm amazed by your work :)

[Hessy]

Again, Amazing your words are just beautiful.I love this line:I know you're wild and I do not wish to tame
I just want to be the one that you claim.

[Barbara Borel]

This is fantastic. Very Romantic... " Let's kill the games Bury the corpses along with the shame
I know you're wild and I do not wish to tame
I just want to be the one that you claim"..... Just love this

[Mr. Lopez]

There's an art to the chase that makes the fruit that much sweeter. Well written.

[Tabby Mac]

Wow! I can feel the desire! Well done. I love everything about this poem.

[Colton Warr]

I'm glad you could feel the desire within these words! I appreciate your kind remarks! Thank you so much for giving this a read!

[Emily]

Love the first line!!
Keep it up!

[Colton Warr]

Thank you so much, Emily! I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thank you so much for giving this a read! Peace and success to you!

[Irenic]

A nicely carved poem. Very well-versed.
Keep on writing!

[Colton Warr]

Thank you so much, my friend! I'm glad you enjoyed this piece! Thanks for giving this a read! Peace and success to you!

[Irenic]

welcome!...............................:)

[Debbie_Philly]

Wow beautiful..would love some one to write to me like that 😊. Very romantic

[Colton Warr]

Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed this one! The biggest compliment a writer can offer his interests is to make them the soul of one of his pieces. That's what I think, anyways lol. I'm sure someone will pen to you soon! Thanks for giving this a read!

[andrew mitchell]

Its funny how two people in love can be on the same plane of thought and yet have that distance and man has always been the romantic one, women are so much more in control and reserved. Nice work

[Colton Warr]

Thank you very much, Andrew! Thank you for sharing your thoughts! I agree! Today's society and the way dating is, it's crazy out there. We'll see what happens. Thank you very much for reading!

[Coyote Poetry]

Hope, need and wishes. We do pray for proper ending.
"I long to know you, I long for a taste
For us to collide, perhaps you should brace
Only one chance is all that I desire
And, doll, nothing else will you ever require "
The above lines were my favorite. Thank you Colton for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Colton Warr]

Thank you so much, my friend! I'm glad this one was received well by you! This is a modern issue and one that I am currently going through. Is today's technology making it harder to meet people? We'll see what happens! Thank you for giving this one a read!

[Coyote Poetry]

I enjoyed this one and you are welcome.