Belong

Belong

A Poem by Colton Warr

She belongs in the temporary moments of a dream 

Taking me away from my nightmare screams

On my knees for my sins, her love redeems

She has, to this day, been my one and only theme 

She belongs to an unknown planet out in space 

I am crash landing and so I brace

The way back home I never want to retrace

Forever we are to roam the stars, hands interlaced

She belongs in the great blue sky

If up is not the way then I have gone awry

We can lay with the clouds until we die

If her touch is the rain, I never want to be dry

She belongs to the vastness of the ocean

Which ever way her tide pulls, that is my motion

Like to the sand the waters soaks, she is my devotion

I have crashed into her like a wave and I love the commotion

She belongs to all of the wonders of our galaxy

She belongs to all of history’s kings and queens

She belongs to the Angel who plays the harp and sings

She belongs to every golden thing, yet here she is kissing me 

Reviews

[rickm97]

Love is the true sweetness of life. Nothing compares.
It is everything...
...in its absence we are nothing except lost, awaiting that gentle rush to overwhelm us once again.
It is life's greatest joy...
...and its greatest pain.
It is as a dichotomy in nature.
I miss her so.

Well done, my friend.
I hope that you find love as true as that of my Karin...
...for then you will have everything.

[Colton Warr]

I could have not said it any better than that, my friend! So beautiful! I can't even begin to imagine or comprehend how it would feel to lose someone as perfect as your wife must have been. And I know she was because she picked a strong and loving man to be with. You will see her again one day and you will get to be with her for all of eternity. I am so grateful that you read this piece!

P.S. It makes my soul happy that my words can remind you of someone who sounds like an angel. Just wanted to thank you for giving me that opportunity. Thank you for your support.

[rickm97]

She was the strong one, and she truly was an angel.
But she, like all of us, was flawed and had her struggles.
Life can get very ugly sometimes, and soon I'll try to depict her courage in dealing with it.
Thanks.

[Siobhan]

Really enjoyed this poem. Very captivating.
Thanks for sharing a good read that I could visualize.
Bravo.

[Colton Warr]

I appreciate you stopping by and sharing your positive and encouraging words! I'm glad you enjoyed this piece! Thanks for giving this a read!

[Siobhan]

Your most welcome. The pleasure was mine.

[CommandoDolphin]

This is beautiful, rarely do I read love poetry like this.
When people write honest to their heart. There is an elegance created.
Well done.

[Colton Warr]

Thank you so much, my friend! Your words are too kind! I am humbled that you would read this despite not usually reading love poetry. I'm glad you enjoyed! Thanks for giving it a read!

[Writer_next_door]

This is an amazing piece of writing. It was dreamlike and lovely. A great poem!

[Colton Warr]

Thank you very much, AnneMarie! Your words are too sweet! I'm glad you enjoyed this piece! Thanks for giving it a read!

[DeerInHeadlights]

this is very lovely.. I think any woman would love to read this about herself, just knowing that is how she is seen. We all like to be held high, seen and esteemed in a good way.. and you are doing just that. how nice it must feel :)

[Colton Warr]

Thank you very much, my friend! I appreciate the kind and thoughtful words! I'm glad you enjoyed this piece! I agree, I think every women deserves to be held high in the eyes of their soulmate. Thank you for giving this a read!

[Calamityofgin]

Ahh...and there she is kissing you..d elight delight delight of woman. Never forget..her sway.

[Colton Warr]

Thank you very much, my friend, for the kind and thoughtful words! I can assure you, I will never forget her sway. For it is too great to be forgotten! Thanks for giving this a read!

[Sreenath]

i feel love makes the earth to revolve ...love makes living easy... love is what makes us feel something that we are worth for.. this is really a nice piece of poem .. enjoyed reading it ,,, the feel flows throughout the lines and binds the emotion together, keep smiling :)

[Colton Warr]

Thank you very much, my friend! I appreciate the kind review! I couldn't agree more, love does indeed make the earth revolve. There is too much hatred and anger out there and it must be solved with love. I appreciate you giving this a read!

[Insight "MH"]

"If her touch is the rain, I never want to be dry"

I love this line the most, and you surely you put all your emotions in this piece, that's why, for me, it became a wonderful journey going from one line to another. Thank you for sharing this beauty.

Insight.

[Colton Warr]

Thank you so much, my friend! I am grateful for your kind review! I'm glad you enjoyed this piece and could feel the emotion within! Thanks for stopping by and giving this a read!

[Insight "MH"]

You are mostly welcome

[rach]

Such a sweet way to pen your love, you can feel the adoration through your words.

[Colton Warr]

Thank you very much, Rach! I'm glad you enjoyed this piece and could recognize its adoration! I appreciate the kind review! Thanks for giving this a read!

[Ashira Macy]

This was very sweet. Reminds me of that song that goes "she's so high above me, like Cleopatra, Joan of Arc or Aphrodite."

[Colton Warr]

Thank you very much, Ashira! I appreciate the kind words! I know exactly the song you are talking about! I'm glad it reminded you of such lyrics! Thanks for giving this a read!

[Saruwa]

I love the way you make "her" larger than life. Attributing her love to you as greatness and beauty all around you, yet somehow tangible to you and "yours". Like you are grateful that someone so angelic could belong to you. What a beautiful piece. Love is well encapsulated in these words. Thanks for sharing your heart with us.

[Colton Warr]

Thank you very much, Sarah! I appreciate your kind and encouraging review! I'm glad you enjoyed this one and could feel the emotion wrapped within its words. She truly is something like an angel, and how I deserve her I will never know. Thanks for giving this a read!