Madd Maxx: The Entries of a Man Under Marque

Madd Maxx: The Entries of a Man Under Marque

A Story by Colton Warr
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Madd Maxx: The Entires of a Man Under Marque

A Story by Colton Warr  


Entry 52

June 3, 1707

Just North of Brazil


It was a beautiful day to be at sea. One that almost persuades you to drop anchor wherever you are and drink every drop of rum in the coffins of your ship. These days reminded me of a simpler time. My soul has always belonged to the sea, but there was a time my heart belonged to a woman. A beautiful woman, glowing and shining even more than the sea itself. She came from a christian family and was very christian herself. I, however, was not. My mind began to wander back to the days I would sit with her in church, counting the minutes until food could offer some sort of escape. “Maxwell” she would always say as she tried to reestablish my attention to whatever the pastor was saying. It was at this time that a heavily bearded man came barreling through the door, startling me to the point where I rose up out of my chair. 

“Captain!” 

“What is it?” 

“Ship spotted, sir. Some of the men think she's Spanish.”  

I then collected myself and placed the book I was reading down on my desk, marking the page carefully, for it was one of my favorites. 

“Some of the men think she's Spanish or some of the men know she's Spanish?” 

The heavily bearded man stuttered out a response. 

“Uh, well when we were discussing it we thought that no other country would have ships this far south. Seeing as how theres a mighty war going on further north.” 

“There is a war going on everywhere, no part of the sea is excused from it.” 

The heavily bearded man swallowed hard and continued to listen.

“Now, we only have clearance to attack Spanish vessels. If we were to attack say a French or Dutch vessel…and the Royal Navy were to find out…have you ever felt the rough and rigid feeling of a thick rope wrapped around your neck, lad?” 

“No! No! I don't wanna, cap’n.” He nervously replied. 

“Then please go back out there and give me knowledge, not notion. Tell me if she is Spanish or not!” 

The bearded man went back through the doors he previously stumbled in through. I started to breathe heavy and placed my hand upon the book and closed my eyes. I knew what it was, I just needed to be sure. He returned. 

“She's Spanish, cap’n. I’ve seen the flag myself.” 

“And that is so reassuring.” 

I walked out of the door moving him out of the way. I pulled out my spyglass and scanned over the ship. I felt a slight grin upon my face. 

“She’s a Spanish merchant ship…and she's alone. Run out the guns, lads! Full canvas, give me all sail! Run her down or i’ll throw five of my choosin’ in the brig for three days with no grub!”

I watched my crew of convicts, pirates and ex-sailors spring into action. They knew there was an easy prize to be had. It only took moments for us to catch her. Our ships were almost side by side. I could see the fear of the crew on the opposing ship. They could not hope to defend themselves against rabid dogs, for they were hungry. Once I felt our enemy was about to fire, I gave my order.

“Fire you scalawags! Send them to the depths, but careful not to harm their precious cargo.” I yelled with a laugh. 

Our vessel released a punishing blow of cannon to the enemy. Sending shards of wood flying through the air. Their volley hit us, doing almost no damage. We outgunned our enemy. Another volley shredded their hull. 

“Gents…grab a hook, we have some fish to catch.” I yelled with another laugh.

My men willingly grabbed their hooks and tossed them over to the other ship. When it was close enough, they placed wooden planks to connect the two ships. All of this was taking place in a fog of musket and cannon fire. My men spilled over onto the enemies deck, slicing and piercing their way through any poor soul in their path. I made my way over next, withdrawing my cutlass as I stepped over the dead bodies of their crew. Most of the work had been done by now. 

“Sir, the enemy captain is held up in his quarters, he says he has a meetin’ with you.” A man cracked. 

“Well, it would be dishonorable to miss a meeting with a fellow captain.” I said with a smile. I heard my crew laugh. I walked up to the door and placed my ear on it. I noticed my crew watching me with a question mark of intensity. 

“Bearded man, come here.” I ordered as I pulled away.

“Open this door. Don’t get shot.”

The bearded man then slowly reached for the door and grabbed the handle. He looked up at me and I gave him a nod as I was off to the side. As he opened the door I heard the sound of a pistol go off. I looked down at the bearded man and saw blood starting to spill form his chest. I proceeded to walk through the door as I heard another pistol go off. I heard a shot whistle right by my ear. 

“Ahh, you must of had a good season, two pistols aye mate?” 

I continued to walk into the room. I saw the captain violently trying to reload one of the two pistols. 

“Where are you coming from, Spaniard?” I asked as I approached him. 

“More importantly, where are you headin’?”

He rose back up and cocked the hammer of his pistol. Before he could extend his aim I slashed at him with my cutlass, relieving the man of his right arm. I heard him scream as his blood began to drench the wood. 

“Not to add salt here mate, but this is Spanish made.” I cracked as I showed off my now blood soaked blade. 

“Cap’n, we found something stashed with the plunder, sir.” 

I turned to look at the voice only to see a pleasant surprise, a small group of slaves. 

“Well look here, boys. We seemed to have taken a merchant ship with a hidden gem.” I spoke as I walked over to them. I analyzed the four of them. I took my cutlass and lightly sliced one of the four with it, cutting the man and unleashing a gentle stream of blood. 

“They are strong and built for the field. They will bring us a pretty penny when we land at Port Royal. To the brig, lads.” 

Just as I finished I noticed an absence of screaming, I turned and saw the Captain attempting to charge me with his sword. I dodged his unbalanced attempt and sliced through his back. He dropped to the ground with another scream. I then sheathed my sword and drew my pistol. I pulled back the hammer and aimed it at his head. 

“Wait!” I called to the men pulling the slaves away to the brig. They all turned to watch. 

“You know something else, mate, this pistol is also Spanish made.” With that I pulled the trigger and shot the man dead. 


As my men were loading up our ship with the plunder they found another slave and brought him across the planks. There was something different about this one. 

“Stop!” I yelled before they stepped onto my vessel. I walked up to the slave and looked him up and down. 

“You have blue eyes. You have a mark on your face. It is from a whip. Why there, I wonder? Were you disobedient? You have a brand on the back of your neck from a plantation I once visited. You walk with a limp because you've been shot in the leg, a failed escape…Does anyone know of a man said to have these attributes?” I looked around at my crew. 

“I do. I’ll let you tell my men who you are though.” I stepped back to see if he would answer. He looked up at me and started to breathe heavy. His eyes stared at me with anger. 

“I am Khari.” he said. 

“Khari, descendent of royalty from West Africa. You would have been a king yourself if you hadn't been called to a higher purpose.” I took another step back from the plank. 

“Step down please.” Khari followed the order slowly. Once his feet hit my deck I quickly stepped up to him and stared at his scared face. 

“You are no king on my ship.” After no response from the african, I ordered him to the brig. 

“Finish up, the sooner we hit the sand in Port Royal the sooner we all get paid.” The men finished up and we pulled away from the now sunken ship. 


Entry 53

June 16 1707


We were just a few hours out from Port Royal. I again, found myself reading in my quarters. When I read I was reminded of her. She loved to read and this used to be her favorite book. Even though I was reading, I could hear her voice saying the words in my head. I got to a certain line and I read it over and over again. It was one of her favorites. 

“Maxwell” I could hear her as if she was right next to me. Something about what I was reading gave me the idea of going down and checking on my cargo. So I did. 


I arrived below deck and saw the slaves in a gathering talking amongst each other. 

“I do mean to interrupt here, may I have a word with your king?” I said with a smile. 

The king stepped forward. 

“My liege.” I continued smiling.

“What say you to a few questions? I’m bored and in need of entertainment.”

The king just stared at me in response. 

“Very well, how many plantations have you been to? I would wager three or four.” 

The king continued to stare at me. 

“Another then, I heard you've killed a man, is that true?” 

Again he rejected my question. The others were also staring at me, clinched fists and all. 

“Answer the Captain you worthless-“ I interrupted the man, one of my crew members. 

“Leave us, now.” I ordered my men. At this point it was just me and the group of slaves. I turned again to the king. 

“Is that better?” He was still silent. I didn't grow angry, though. 

“You must be hungry, king?” He shook his head. 

“I have a feast prepared in my quarters and I would like you to accompany me. What say you?” He hesitated before responding. 

“My men, what of their stomachs?” 

“They aren't kings, mate.” 

“They are the kings people.” I could tell he would not back down. I respected that. 

“They will not be coming into my quarters but how about I send down some rations of pork?” The King looked at his fellow men and they all gave him a look of approval and desperation. He then nodded towards me.


I opened my double wooden doors for the king, leading him into my quarters. 

“You want a few men in there, cap’n?” 

“No, that wont be necessary.” 

“But Cap’n, what if he goes for ya?” I paused before responding. 

“Then kill him when he tries to come out.” 

I awaited for him to sit down before I did. I started to place my napkin in my lap and noticed he was frozen. 

“Well you must be hungry, Khari, eat.” The king then dove in as if he was only waiting for permission. Several seconds passed. 

“What was your fathers name?” He stopped eating but didn't answer. I shook it off and kept eating. 

“I’ve worked at three mills.” He finally spoke. I paused in slight disbelief. 

“So the king speaks? Three you say? Tell me of what you saw there. Tell me what happened.” The king again paused before speaking. 

“I saw darkness on a sunny day.” The statement alone sent a chill down my spine. His voice matched that of a kings. 

“Be more specific. Tell me what a man who looked like me did to a man who looked like you.” 

Again a pause. 

“Where I was…mostly sugar mills. Very dangerous. A lot of men dead on the job. Not great food but you become used to it. If you misbehave, you could get the steel trap. One for your face for talking out of line, one for your leg for making a run for it. I wasn't shot, they put the boot on me but did it with reason to hurt me. Didn't help that we only got one nights rest. They was ruthless with the work hours, even more than the whip.” 

“Your face tells of another story.” I implored. 

“My face is from standing in the way of a whip for another man.” 

“So you were protecting someone?” 

“Yes.”

“Was he family?”

“We all are family. There are none left from my own.” We both continued eating as several minutes of silence went by. 

“Would you rather be dead, Khari?” He took a long pause. 

“No, I would rather be free.” 

“I’m not sure freedom is in the cards, mate. I think they have a plantation there. They need men, strong men like you and once they find out you are royalty, you may be shipped off again. There is always a bidder who’s looking for the next investment.” 

Another few seconds passed. 

“What is it that you want, Khari?” 

“A chance.” I looked upon him with despair. We both continued eating in silence. 

“Tis a good book.” 

“What?” He pointed to a book on my desk. I rose up and retrieved it and brought it back to the table. 

“This? This is a good book?” It was the bible. 

“Yes, Jesus is a good man.” 

“And how do you know of Jesus?” 

“The white master at my last mill, he read it a lot and talked to me about it. He was a good man.” 

“You’re calling a slave master, the one with the whip, a good man?” I laughed. 

“He was trying.” I paused to think about what to say.

“I read this book everyday. It reminds me of my wife. It reminds me of a much simpler time. She used to read it everyday. She would read to me and I wouldn't listen. But she kept reading, she kept trying. It wasn't until after I lost her that I started to read it myself. It reminds me of how I've tried and how I've failed. It reminds me that it’s too late to be like him.” 

“I don't think it means to be like him, I think it means try.” I was touched by the kings words. 

“My name is Maxx, and its an honor to dine with you this evening.” 

We were both startled by a knock. I rose up and opened the door. 

“We are here, sir. Port Royal is just there.” Sure enough emerging from the nightly fog was the fort itself. 

“Should we make ready the slaves?” 

“No, let us get some rest for the night. We will sell them in the morning.” I went back inside and told the King of our arrival to Port Royal. 

“I just lost my appetite.” he said as he stood up. 

“Thank you for dinner, captain.” 

I nodded as he left my quarters. I stared at the floor for what had to be minutes. That night I didn't sleep. I tossed and turned as I wrestled with something. 


I was already out of my bed when the sun came up the next day. I was sitting in my chair staring at my desk. I went to grab my bible for my daily morning reading only to notice that it had already been opened. I grabbed it to reveal the page. It was the only one I had marked, her favorite verse. I read it and could hear her voice. On this day, she told me something new. Something I had been missing the whole time. I exited my quarters to see my men loading up the slaves. They were all in shackles, one by one being loaded into the dingy. 

“Bring me the king.” I ordered. My men followed and brought Khari over to me. I took a deep breath. 

“I have an offer for you.” I saw his eyes rise to mine in a small ounce of hope. 

“Luke Chapter 4 verse 18….What say you to skipping out on slavery this go around and joining my crew?” 

Khari stared at me, he didn't really move or speak, he just looked at me with tears in his eyes and smiled.      

© 2015 Colton Warr


Author's Note

Colton Warr
This was a piece I wrote for a summer class I took earlier this season. The class was about the history of the Atlantic world. The three main pillars of the class were religion, slavery, and world expansion. We could write on any topic gone over during the course of the class and were encouraged to include all three pillars. So I chose to base my story around a privateer serving in the War of Spanish Succession who runs across a slave while also reminiscing of his long lost wife who was the light in his life, both emotionally and spiritually. Remember, this is a story, an historical fiction one at that. Please read and provide feedback.

P.S. I did very well on this paper (an A++, yes the professor wrote that) but I would like some feedback from fellow writers, more from the artist standpoint. Hope you guys enjoy. Thank you all so much for all of the support and positivity you guys share. You all are the best.

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Colton: You are a very talented writer. I took notes, but had to stop at one point due to time constraints; will forward to you soonest. It is beautifully written. From the beginning, your dialougue and descriptions were so very well written I found myself intrigued and could not stop reading. This piece takes a great deal of research and knowledge of the time period. Very well done! It's always important to pull that emotion into the readers mind, to visual the scenary and you excelled. I loved the Captain from the beginning; the solemn heartfelt, but retrained love he revealed. Just brilliant; and the action and content was superb. It was like being in history class, but this time I loved it! The character of the King, the compassion you described with great dialouge made me respect the captain even more. I hope you are proud of this composition. It's a wonderful story and I am so thankful to have been able to read it. Khari character was very well written also; loved the ending. Bravo! Dale

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Colton Warr

9 Years Ago

Confuser: Thank you so much for this kind review! I can't tell you how much your words mean to me! I.. read more
Confuser

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You're welcome!!!



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story which glues the eyezs of mine to computer screen. it is fantastic, very well written. the dialogues of Khari are image forming one, of a boy who had dark past and on the other hand personality of captain had many shades he has the feeling of love so on the other hand ability to kill someone.

Amazing, good write.

one thing is the way you write how he killed his opponent is vivid.

Dialogues are the most appreciate one.

Thanks for sharing..........:)

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Colton Warr

9 Years Ago

Thank you so very much!! I am so happy that you enjoyed this story! I'm glad you enjoyed the main ch.. read more
Irenic

9 Years Ago

Welcome...........................................:)
Wow! Very well done, I found myself so caught up in it that I was disappointed when I finished reading it! Great job! I would like to see this as a novel, this could do very well! Keep it up!

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Colton Warr

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much, Jeremy! I appreciate the kind words! I'm happy to hear that you enjoyed this piec.. read more
Jeremy Hiles

9 Years Ago

You are very welcome! Well I think this could very well end up being something much bigger! 202 vie.. read more
Please make this story into a novel. I was hooked the whole time and couldn't stop reading it. If you ever decide to make this into a novel, I would but it in a heartbeat. Your choice of words painted a crystal clear image in my head, and I felt like I was part of the story. Amazing write!!! Keep up the great work and continue to write:)

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Colton Warr

9 Years Ago

Thank you very much, my friend! I appreciate the kind review! Your words are the definition of posit.. read more
WordShaker33

9 Years Ago

Any time. I found this a very good read, and I believe it would make a wonderful novel. When I finis.. read more
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dan
Colton, I am sorry but due to my mental health disorders I am unable to maintain focus and/or concentration on longer writes like this. I generally don't review stories unless they are short, no chapters and no books. I read your summary at the bottom and it sounds like a winner; I never had a prof give me such a high mark on a paper! Please keep sending me read requests, though. I really like your writing. take care...dan

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Colton Warr

9 Years Ago

Dan, no worries at all! I appreciate the heads up! That is completely understandable! Thank you for .. read more
well done... it fit the mind comfortably as a story we would want to likely find but in all conscience and in those times ...the value of the market drove reality.

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Colton Warr

9 Years Ago

Thank you very much, Chris! I'm very glad you enjoyed this story! I agree, in reality, perhaps the g.. read more
Very good write, I couldn't take my eyes off it
I admire how smoothly and accurate your dialogue is.
Can't wait to read more!

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Colton Warr

9 Years Ago

Thank you very much, Olivia! I appreciate your kind words so much! You are too sweet! I'm happy you .. read more
Such an interesting story. Loved it :D

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Colton Warr

9 Years Ago

Thank you very much, my friend! I'm glad you enjoyed this story! Thank you very much for stopping by.. read more
Ellay

9 Years Ago

You're welcome :)
Hi, this was a fun story to read. I have two suggestions
1) Check on this--when was Brazil actually called Brazil. If it is after 1707, you might want to change that. I know at one point it was referred to as Terra de Brasil. I truthfully have no idea when the shift was made and accepted by many.
2) In this small section you refer to him as the "heavily bearded man" 3x. I would consider varying that as the reader could infer who you meant without the word heavily each time.

Overall enjoyable!

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Colton Warr

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much, my friend! I'm happy you enjoyed the story!
1) I double checked on when B.. read more
Very nicely written, keep it up, looking forward to more.

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Colton Warr

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much, Rachel! I appreciate the kind words! Thanks for giving this a read!
I found this to be a very compelling write. Once I started to read, I had to finish what you had provided.
The print was a little small for so much material to read but, I got through it slowly.
My one concern if you are going to extend your story into a book is that you have so much dialogue that it takes away from the flow of where the story is taking the reader in terms of time ie, days at sea, other ports of call, etc. It seems that I got lost in conversations in this write.


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Colton Warr

9 Years Ago

Thank you very much, my friend! I'm glad you enjoyed the story! Perhaps I should make the font sligh.. read more

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