An Undelivered Poem

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An Undelivered Poem

A Poem by Colton Warr

I feel unsettled and missing

Like a nomad traveling through an unknown land

Nettled and Reminiscing 

I once knew every small texture of your hand

I feel confused and paranoid

Like a man who had just committed murder

Fused and Destroyed 

My mind does everything to preserve her 

I feel soulless and guilty

Like the Grim Reaper who comes to take 

Boneless and Filthy 

I am broken in ways I did not know I could break 

I feel stressed and disturbed 

Like a student before the final exam

Oppressed and Perturbed 

I think I have given you all that I am

*****

Could I ask?

Do you sometimes feel as if you’re going through the motions?

Drink from my flask

I beg to again be lost within your ocean

Could I touch?

Do you sometimes reach out for my face with your hand?

Your hearts clutch

Shackle me in, never again to disband 

Could I kiss?

Do you sometimes still gaze into nothing, wishing it was me?

I guess I miss,

Whenever you were the only thing I would ever see

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Amazing poetry my friend. You brought me in and held me to the last words.
"Could I touch?
Do you sometimes reach out for my face with your hand?
Your hearts clutch
Shackle me in, never again to disband
Could I kiss?"
The above lines are amazing. I could write a complete poem from these words and emotion. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Colton Warr]

Thank you so much, Coyote! I'm happy you enjoyed this poem! Your words are always so kind and encouraging, I deeply appreciate that! The emotion was strong in this one for me and these words cut deep. If you remember my poem "She is..." This is about the same girl, we are no longer together and it is from my doing. Even after all that she is still my muse though, isn't that interesting? Thanks for stopping by and giving this a read, my friend!

[Coyote Poetry]

We don't forget and you are welcome.

[Paramount]

I absolutely loved every line of it. I do not know what else to say. It was just amazing. This is an incredible piece of poetry. Well done.

[Colton Warr]

Thank you very much! I appreciate the kind words! I'm happy you enjoyed this piece! Thanks for giving it a read!

[SmittyJas]

Very impressionable I love the meaning and the layout it is smooth and well crafted poem I approve of this message.

[Colton Warr]

Thank you so much, my friend! I'm glad you approve! I appreciate the kind words! Thanks for giving this one a read!

[Freesearch 101]

I like this one!!!Keep up the good work!!!

[Colton Warr]

Thank you so much, Matthew! I'm glad you enjoyed this one! Thanks for giving it a read!

[Carrie.]

This piece has a gem in every stanza, a beautiful twist of words or descriptions perfectly penned.

[Colton Warr]

Thank you very much, Carrie! Your words are too kind! I'm happy you liked this one! Thanks for giving it a read!

[Kelly Scheppers]

"I beg to again be lost within your ocean"

This reads as though you were giving life to every word with every breath you took.

[Colton Warr]

Thank you so much, Kelly! I love the way you put that. I'm glad you enjoyed this one! Thanks for stopping by and giving it a read!

[Semaj "I AM" Allure]

Your analogy game is on clutch my friend! That's a good thing:)

[Colton Warr]

Haha Thank you very much, my friend! I appreciate you saying that! Thanks for stopping by and checking this one out!

[Lydia Shutter]

The conflicted emotions are expressed honestly and are very believable. Good similes and metaphors. The longing is palpable. Lydi**

[Colton Warr]

Thank you so much, Lydia! I'm glad you were able to feel the emotion in this one. This piece cut deep for me to pen so I'm glad that depth is portrayed well. Thanks for stopping by and giving it a read!

[Robert]

A very emotional piece here Colton. I hope writing helps you deal with the situation you are going through. I know it helps people that read it. Keep writing Colton.

[Colton Warr]

Thank you so much, Robert! Writing is my greatest release and it absolutely helps me in situations like this. Honestly, there hasn't been a situation that writing hasn't helped me through yet! It is so liberating to pen true and raw emotion. I appreciate the positivity and encouragement. Thanks for reading!

[Robert]

No Problem Colton, you are talented so. Keep writing.

[Jamestown]

Well penned!
Emotional piece that gets reader hooked early:)
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Colton Warr]

Thank you very much, my friend! I appreciate the kind words! I'm happy you enjoyed this one! Thanks for giving it a read and thank you for the continuing support!

[Kimberly Miller]

Wow, this is beautiful! Your choice of words and expression is amazing. So deep and thoughtful! A new favorite for me! :)

[Colton Warr]

Thank you very much, Kimberly! I'm glad this is a new favorite for you and that you enjoyed this piece! I appreciate you giving this a read!

[Kimberly Miller]

Your welcome! Haha, it is for sure! Of course, your writes are phenomenal and I always get so much out of each one!

[Emma Kirchhoff]

Loving the structure of the beginning four stanzas, following in the same format each time. Very beautifully written, lots of relatable emotion, especially as it ends! Thank you for sharing!

[Colton Warr]

Thank you so much, Emma! I'm happy you enjoyed this piece and I'm happy you were able to relate! Thanks for giving this a read!