An Undelivered Poem

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An Undelivered Poem

A Poem by Colton Warr

I feel unsettled and missing

Like a nomad traveling through an unknown land

Nettled and Reminiscing 

I once knew every small texture of your hand

I feel confused and paranoid

Like a man who had just committed murder

Fused and Destroyed 

My mind does everything to preserve her 

I feel soulless and guilty

Like the Grim Reaper who comes to take 

Boneless and Filthy 

I am broken in ways I did not know I could break 

I feel stressed and disturbed 

Like a student before the final exam

Oppressed and Perturbed 

I think I have given you all that I am

*****

Could I ask?

Do you sometimes feel as if you’re going through the motions?

Drink from my flask

I beg to again be lost within your ocean

Could I touch?

Do you sometimes reach out for my face with your hand?

Your hearts clutch

Shackle me in, never again to disband 

Could I kiss?

Do you sometimes still gaze into nothing, wishing it was me?

I guess I miss,

Whenever you were the only thing I would ever see

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Amazing poetry my friend. You brought me in and held me to the last words.
"Could I touch?
Do you sometimes reach out for my face with your hand?
Your hearts clutch
Shackle me in, never again to disband
Could I kiss?"
The above lines are amazing. I could write a complete poem from these words and emotion. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Colton Warr]

Thank you so much, Coyote! I'm happy you enjoyed this poem! Your words are always so kind and encouraging, I deeply appreciate that! The emotion was strong in this one for me and these words cut deep. If you remember my poem "She is..." This is about the same girl, we are no longer together and it is from my doing. Even after all that she is still my muse though, isn't that interesting? Thanks for stopping by and giving this a read, my friend!

[Coyote Poetry]

We don't forget and you are welcome.

[Paramount]

I absolutely loved every line of it. I do not know what else to say. It was just amazing. This is an incredible piece of poetry. Well done.

[Colton Warr]

Thank you very much! I appreciate the kind words! I'm happy you enjoyed this piece! Thanks for giving it a read!

[Johnson Bobby]

sometimes theres parts left left over that we find are troubling us to put them where they belong
instructions don't with a broken heart manual we try to repair broken tomoorows today
and the pain heightens and soon disapates for it shall come again

[Asra Hakak]

so very deep, it touched my heart, emotional
simply loved it

[Colton Warr]

Thank you so much, my friend! I'm glad you enjoyed this piece and felt its emotion. Thanks for giving it a read! I apologize for the late response!

[NotGoodEnough]

Well, as I read this I felt the emotion built into it. You spoke from your heart and soul, and connected with me. I was tearing up as I read it.

[Colton Warr]

Thank you very much! Your words are too kind! I am happy you were able to connect to these words. I am honored that you stopped by and took the time to read this! I apologize for the delayed response!

[Calamityofgin]

I loved this one doll...if a man wrote this with me in mind..I'd cum running to his knee.
Love the two word rhyme structure in the first part...perfectly chosen, unique life images that show both who you are..and you ache, frustration and deep longing.
Confuzzled heart questions at the end..bringing a dual piece closure that leaves the mind flooded.

Mih favorite of yours I think...quite a talented, creative, deep thinking felling man Sir.

Love and wishes for soul closure...

Calamity of Jennifer

[Colton Warr]

Thank you so much, my friend! Your words are too sweet! I am humbled and honored by your review of this piece! I'm glad you enjoyed this one and could feel all of the complex and lonely emotions intertwined with these words. I appreciate you saying this is your favorite. Thank you so much for giving this a read!

[Colton Warr]

I apologize for the late response!

[Briana Noël Manzan..]

I loved this, it touched a sentimental part of me. I could hear a voice speaking it softly; speaking of love lost but not over. The kind of love you remember at night, when you're lonely and drunk, when you're at your lowest point and you need the touch of someone you loved again.
10/10 amazing job!

[Colton Warr]

Thank you very much, Briana! I'm glad you enjoyed this piece and could hear it as the voice inside of your head! I am humbled by your kind review! Thank you so much for giving this a read!

[Colton Warr]

I apologize for the late response!

[Cris Roley]

Nice with the rhyme, nice with the rhythm and you made it easy to translate what you're going through and easy for us to relate. The poem exists on its own, so it can be delivered to every heart, as a good poem should. Keep writing, you were obviously meant to.

[Colton Warr]

Thank you so much, Cris! I am forever grateful for your kind and encouraging words! I'm glad you enjoyed this one and could relate easily to its emotion. I am grateful for your review and kindness, thanks for reading!

[Daniela Diaz]

I absolutely love your writing style! Its extremely expressive and draws you in from the get go.. Completely in love with the wording of this one in particular.
Simply amazing :)

[Colton Warr]

Thank you very much, Dani! I am grateful for your kind review! I'm glad you enjoyed this piece and could be drawn in by its words! Thank you so much for giving this a read!

[daninstockholm]

beautiful piece of longing, missing and depth, superbly written!

[Colton Warr]

Thank you very much, my friend! Your words are too kind! I am glad that you enjoyed this one and felt its longing. Thanks for stopping by and giving this a read!

[Kiran]

oh my god...took my breath away, reading this one..

[Colton Warr]

Thank you so much, Kiran! I'm glad these words had such an impact on you! I appreciate you stopping by and giving this piece a read!

[Connie]

a great poem, each line so powerful

[Colton Warr]

Thank you very much, Connie! I appreciate the kind remarks! I'm glad you enjoyed this one! Thanks for reading!