My Sunrise

 My Sunrise

A Poem by Colton Warr

Nothing compares to My Sunrise

I can eternally see it in her eyes

It is the feeling of a thousand highs

For her, there will be no compromise

 

Nothing compares to watching her sleep

As I listen to her breathe, she is so at peace  

I felt no pain when I took this leap

It is her that I plan to keep

 

Nothing compares to her cute little stretches

She is so smooth around the edges

More beautiful than a million sketches

My love for her is reckless

 

Nothing compares to her bloom

I want to love her until the tomb

She is everything so dear and so true

Nothing compares to waking up next to you 

Reviews

[Matching Socks]

That's a really sweet love poem Colton, nice job. :)

[Colton Warr]

Thank you Ana! Thanks for reading, I'm glad you enjoyed!

[Leslie Philibert]

Nice write, it is not easy to keep a rhyme interesting over four lines.

[Colton Warr]

Thank you! I appreciate you stopping by and reading! I'm glad you enjoyed, thanks again!

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

A very romantic piece of writing… when we love someone it is those little things that mean the most to us.

[Colton Warr]

Exactly! I couldn't agree more! Thanks for stopping by and reading!

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful and hopeful poem for love. I like the endearing emotion described in the poetry.
"She is everything so dear and so true
Nothing compares to waking up next to you "
Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Colton Warr]

Thank you for reading!! I appreciate the positive words!

[Saddam]

Nothing compares to her cute little stretches
She is so smooth around the edges
More beautiful than a million sketches
My love for her is reckless

Amezing, I love her too. A very niceand well written art to read. Greatly done your job dear friend. A sure no one will compare it.

[Colton Warr]

Thank you so much for the kind words!! I'm glad you liked it, thanks for stopping by and giving it a read!

[Miles W.]

A very well written poem. It shows the power that true love has and how it can last through all time. Well done sir!

[Colton Warr]

Thank you very much! I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for reading!