My Sunrise

 My Sunrise

A Poem by Colton Warr

Nothing compares to My Sunrise

I can eternally see it in her eyes

It is the feeling of a thousand highs

For her, there will be no compromise

 

Nothing compares to watching her sleep

As I listen to her breathe, she is so at peace  

I felt no pain when I took this leap

It is her that I plan to keep

 

Nothing compares to her cute little stretches

She is so smooth around the edges

More beautiful than a million sketches

My love for her is reckless

 

Nothing compares to her bloom

I want to love her until the tomb

She is everything so dear and so true

Nothing compares to waking up next to you 

Reviews

[Roxie M]

This so dear! It could be about a wife, a child, a lover! So lovely, so real with how love impacts us! AI like the write so much!

[Colton Warr]

Thank you so much, Roxie! I'm happy you enjoyed this piece! Thanks for stopping by and giving it a read!

[GreenShoes]

Well, you two were very fortunate to find such love. Having a poem like this written about you is a very special thing. I'm sure she will treasure it forever.

[Colton Warr]

Thank you so much, my friend! We are fortunate, indeed! A lot of my love poems are for her. I hope she does treasure this one and the others forever. I'm glad you enjoyed this piece! Thank for giving it a read!

[Saeedaullah]

Wow this is beautiful. I'm speechless honestly. If someone wrote me a poem like this I would tear up or possible cry.

[Colton Warr]

Thank you so much, my friend! I appreciate your kind words! I'm happy that you enjoyed this piece!! I'm glad these words could move you in such a powerful way. I am certain that there will come a day where someone will love you like this. Everyone deserves that. Thank you so much for giving this a read!

[Cladine]

The heart of a man has spoken. :) So gentle and soft. This really shows the admiration he has for the girl. Wonderfully written and i love how you play with your words, truly simplicity is beauty. :)

[Colton Warr]

Thank you so much, Cladine! The spoken word of how every mans heart should sound. I appreciate your kind words! I'm happy you could feel the admiration. Thank you so much for reading this piece! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

[Veronique]

Ahh so tenderly your hearts words caress the page with a gentle love so soft like the velvet petals of the red rose petal kissed by the morning dew my friend...very beautiful indeed!

[Colton Warr]

Thank you very much, Veronique! I appreciate the kind and encouraging words! I'm glad you enjoyed this piece! Thanks for reading!

[xansizi]

What a lovely piece of poetry. I love how you show that beauty is in the eye of the beholder and that love can bring beauty to the littlest of things. This poem made me smile

[Colton Warr]

Thank you so much, my friend! I appreciate the kind and encouraging words! Beauty is indeed in the eye of the beholder, and those eyes can indeed see love in any small thing. I can't explain it, but the small things are so perfect to me, just beautiful. Thanks for giving this one a read!

[Ovi-Odiete]

A very well defined poem that catches ones attention.

[Colton Warr]

Thank you very much, my friend! I'm glad you enjoyed this one! Thanks for reading!

[guy drori]

Sounds like he really loves her, and she sounds like she's really special to him. Liked your line breaks and your natural usage of rhyming. Adding descriptions of nature such as 'sunrise' and 'bloom' gives a very vivid image.

[Colton Warr]

Thank you so much, Guy! They both used to be very special to each other, my friend! This was another piece I penned for my ex girlfriend. She was my muse and perhaps still is, I penned a lot for her. I'm glad you enjoyed this piece, my friend! Thanks for giving it a read!

[Justin Robben]

Great effort! I've said numerous times that poetry isn't my thing. It speaks a higher language that I'm not fluent in.
But I understood this one. :) and for me, that's a big part of my enjoyment of them.
All in all, a sweet piece. Thanks for sharing it with us.

[Colton Warr]

Thank you very much, Justin! I'm glad this one spoke to you like that and you were able to enjoy it! I appreciate the kind words, thanks for reading!

[pikachulover]

Haha, good poem ;) A lovely one !

[Colton Warr]

Thank you very much, my friend! I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for giving it a read!