My Sunrise

 My Sunrise

A Poem by Colton Warr

Nothing compares to My Sunrise

I can eternally see it in her eyes

It is the feeling of a thousand highs

For her, there will be no compromise

 

Nothing compares to watching her sleep

As I listen to her breathe, she is so at peace  

I felt no pain when I took this leap

It is her that I plan to keep

 

Nothing compares to her cute little stretches

She is so smooth around the edges

More beautiful than a million sketches

My love for her is reckless

 

Nothing compares to her bloom

I want to love her until the tomb

She is everything so dear and so true

Nothing compares to waking up next to you 

Reviews

[Nightfeather]

This is how I will feel when I will live together with my future wife, but I have to confess my love first but I really like this heartwarming poem. I can feel that you are a person who loves his loved one with not 100% but with 200%. For thy words cannot lie and tell me that you really love your wife. This is a lovely masterpiece and I have really enjoyed the peaceful air that lingered around this brilliant poem!

Good job :D

[Colton Warr]

Thank you very much! I'm glad you are enjoying my words! And when you tell her that you love her it will be a most magical day! You will feel unlike you have ever felt before. I'm glad you can see how much I love her by my words. That means a lot to me. I love her beyond the farthest reaches of space. Thank you for the positive review! I appreciate you reading this one!

[Nightfeather]

No problem my friend and I cannot wait for my magical day :)

[Cat]

Beautiful, such a kind and tender piece.

[Colton Warr]

Thank you so much, Cat! I'm happy you enjoyed this piece. I love the word "tender" used to describe this. Thank you very much for giving this a read!

[mattavelli]

This is lovely. I wake up next to my wife and son. I enjoy watching them wake up.

[Colton Warr]

Thank you very much! I'm happy you enjoyed this one! Waking up next to those we love and would give anything for is a feeling that I wish upon everyone to have for the rest of their lives. its a magical thing. Thanks for giving this a read!

[Neythan Cardoso]

This is my type of writing! absolutely love it!

[Colton Warr]

Thank you so much, my friend! I'm glad you enjoyed this piece! Thanks for giving it a read!

[Neythan Cardoso]

No problem

[Sierra D3]

I simply couldn't stop smiling while reading this, the true ,and deep compassion and love shines bright with every written word.

[Colton Warr]

Thank you very much, Sierra! I'm glad my words could have such and warm and compassionate affect on you! I appreciate the kind words and I'm happy you enjoyed this one! Thank you very much for giving this a read!

[Ben Noah Suri]

Great expression of love..... Waking up next to the beloved taken to a new level altogether.... Kudos

[Colton Warr]

Thank you so much! I appreciate the kind and encouraging words! I'm glad you enjoyed this piece! Thank you for giving it a read!

[Gamitsuki]

Wonderful work.....the last three paragraphs were awesome.....beautifully depicted....n' thanks for sharing and giving me idea about what to write after such a long break.....keep the good work.....

[Colton Warr]

Thank you very much! I'm glad you enjoyed this piece! And I'm even more glad to have inspired you! I appreciate the kind words! Thanks for reading!

[Weeping willow]

Beautifully expressed with good emotions;]

[Colton Warr]

Thank you so much, my friend! I'm glad you enjoyed this piece! Thanks so much for stopping by and checking it out!

[Indra Neil]

beautiful and heartfelt imagery! well done!

[Colton Warr]

Thank you so much, my friend! I appreciate the kind words! I'm glad you enjoyed this one! Thanks for stopping by and checking it out!

[Indra Neil]

u r most welcome!

[TinaM201549]

great writing, you do have a way with words. She is so smooth around the edges. great line. Tina

[Colton Warr]

Thank you so much, my friend! I appreciate the kind words! You are too sweet! I'm happy you enjoyed this piece! Thanks for giving it a read!