She is...

A small dose...

She is…
A Poem by Colton Warr

I am saved,
As shock and electricity sizzle through my veins
A furious flow of a feeling so new to me
She is glowing like lights in the city

I am enamored,
As I look at her, butterflies prevent proper use of grammar
A star in the sky entrancing my gaze
She is the cause of all of my happy days

I am overwhelmed,
As I am abducted and taken to her realm
A different planet I am on, yet scared I am not
She is a creation in which beauty she is infinitely beyond

I am happy,
As simple as that may be, I am happy
A search thought to be lost, yet here I am found
She is a wild flower to which I am bound

She is a ray from the sun, never to be brought down
She is a queen with a diamond crown
She is a hurricane crashing into me
She is the clearest and most dazzling of waves from an endless sea
She is outer space and all things breath taking and unknown
She is perfect…I want to be the reason she will never be alone
She is a thief in the night, stealing my heart, perhaps
She is, she is…but I don’t want it back.

Reviews

[Diane Lockard]

A beautifully written poem, powerful emotions and she is all things, maybe....

[Colton Warr]

Thank you so much for reading and commenting!!

[Prakalaka]

" i am happy
as simple as that may be, i am happy"......amazing and im just impressed.

[Colton Warr]

I appreciate you reading and taking the time to comment! Thank you so much!

[Prakalaka]

it's my gr8 pleasure

[LaylaK21]

Wow, I can feel all the emotion presented here, and see all the imagery as well. Great description and detail!

[Colton Warr]

Thank you so much for reading and commenting!

[R Smith]

she is lucky, you are lucky, now we are lucky that you were inspired to write such a beautiful and powerful poem, long may you continue my friend :)

[Colton Warr]

Thank you so much for the inspiring words! I'm glad you enjoyed the poem! As long as the words come to me, I indeed shall continue! Thanks again!

[Lyn Anderson]

I like the way this poem builds to an ending which could lean either way, depending on your interpretation. Well done.

[Colton Warr]

Thanks for the nice words and thanks for reading!

[Madeline]

Absolutely beautiful. And like others have have said, "hurricane crashing in.." is a wonderful line that accurately describes the way I have felt before. Your muse is a lucky girl..:)

[Colton Warr]

I appreciate you stopping by and reading this! That actually was one of my favorite lines when writing this as well. Thanks again!

[Colton Warr]

She is a lucky girl, but perhaps I am a lucky guy as well!

[Eliza Mae]

"She is a hurricane crashing into me"

I love this line; the poem is magnificent!

You did a gracious job portraying your deepest, most intense emotions. Wonderful :)

[Colton Warr]

Thank you, I appreciate the kind words! I'm glad you liked it, thanks for reading! :)

[Jristine Bello]

"She is the thief of the night, stealing my heart..."
How i wish a guy would say this to me :)

[Colton Warr]

And there will come a day when a guy WILL say something like that to you. I promise you that. Thank you very much for reading! I am glad you enjoyed it.

[AprilRN1210]

for a "small dose"..... this is pretty thorough and encompassing.. the depth of emotion and adoration in this piece is moving and powerful.. it is palpable and beautifully affecting.. imagery and phrasing are exquisite and enchanting.. sounds like you are both blessed.. well done. I enjoyed..

[Colton Warr]

Thank you so much!! I am glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for the kind words and thanks for reading!

[AprilRN1210]

you're welcome, it was my pleasure..