She is...

A small dose...

She is…
A Poem by Colton Warr

I am saved,
As shock and electricity sizzle through my veins
A furious flow of a feeling so new to me
She is glowing like lights in the city

I am enamored,
As I look at her, butterflies prevent proper use of grammar
A star in the sky entrancing my gaze
She is the cause of all of my happy days

I am overwhelmed,
As I am abducted and taken to her realm
A different planet I am on, yet scared I am not
She is a creation in which beauty she is infinitely beyond

I am happy,
As simple as that may be, I am happy
A search thought to be lost, yet here I am found
She is a wild flower to which I am bound

She is a ray from the sun, never to be brought down
She is a queen with a diamond crown
She is a hurricane crashing into me
She is the clearest and most dazzling of waves from an endless sea
She is outer space and all things breath taking and unknown
She is perfect…I want to be the reason she will never be alone
She is a thief in the night, stealing my heart, perhaps
She is, she is…but I don’t want it back.

Reviews

[Draven]

A lot of love poetry cane be really cliché and I must say that yours is nothing of the sort. I love the way you really took old ideas and made them so new, made them your own, in order to express these wonderful feelings for her. I can feel the innocence of it all. Well written.

[Colton Warr]

Thank you so much! I truly appreciate the kind words! Thanks for giving this a read!

[Isabella Disney]

Repetitive but not tiring. Your love and devotion is shown very clearly. She is, one lucky girl :)

[Colton Warr]

Thank you very much! Perhaps I am a lucky man as well! Thanks for reading this one!

[Emily]

I like how you keep repeating 'She is'
Great job!

[Colton Warr]

Thank you very much! Thanks for reading!

[The Black Warrior]

This is very beautiful...love how you describe her in your lines

well done

~Suk

[Colton Warr]

Thank you so much! I'm so glad you enjoyed!

[The Black Warrior]

You are welcome...This is a beutiful piece! thank you for sharing :)

[Frontier]

A furious flow of a feeling so new to me
She is glowing like lights in the city - i like this rhyme!

and the ending, wow unexpected, makes it quite interesting.

[Colton Warr]

Thank you very much! I'm happy that you enjoyed it! Thanks for stopping by and reading!

[Nikki]

Very romantic, she sounds like an amazing- and obviously lucky girl! :) Which in term makes you one lucky man. Congratulations and good job. :)

[Colton Warr]

Thank you very much for reading!! I am a very lucky guy indeed! And perhaps she is a lucky girl as well! We make each other happy and that's all that matters. I'm glad you enjoyed!

[Nikki]

:) That is beautiful.

[Cheryl]

I loved this! So romantic and beautiful. I wish my boyfriend would write something this sweet for me!;)

[Colton Warr]

Thank you very much! I am glad you loved it! Perhaps he will! Thanks for reading!

[Wandervogel]

nice one ...loved reading it

[Colton Warr]

Thank you very much! I'm glad you liked it!

[Rocans]

Nice poem. Simple but you got your point across in a sufficiently poetic fashion. I enjoyed reading. Thanks for sharing.

[Colton Warr]

I'm glad you enjoyed this! Thanks for the kind words and thanks for reading!

[Christopher Robin]

Right on target. Good structure, good verse, almost perfect rhymes.

Hard to fault,

-Robin

[Colton Warr]

I'm very happy that you enjoyed this one! Thanks for stopping by and reading!