Eve

Eve

A Poem by Colossus
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the promise of Eve

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So fair her locks, the color of pale wheat at harvest,
 So warm her eyes, a fire warmer than the hearth,
  So soft her skin, luminescent in the moon-light,
Her smile a beacon of hope in a world of ice,
 Her hand a refuge in a sea of turmoil,
  Her touch a shield against the darkness,
She is the breaking of the dawn and the star of the morning,
 She is the yearning of the new day and the promise of the sun,
   She is the mist of the mountains and the calm ocean,
In her care no heart shall mourn,
 In her embrace no soul shall want,
   In her power no star shall wane,
With her faith will always win,
 With her the sun will always shine,
   With her the flowers will always bloom

© 2011 Colossus


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Well thought out, vivid and detailed IMO. Love it man glad I read this.

Posted 11 Years Ago


I enjoyed your write. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 12 Years Ago


I enjoyed this poem. Beautifully spun words and gave me a clear vision of her.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Very eloquent and beautiful

Posted 12 Years Ago


Very nice use of words. I like it.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Colossus
Colossus

Gordonsville, VA



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