WORM

this short story is set in the not to distant future of our galaxy its is a true to life science fiction story about the creation of Dr lumino genetical altered worms that will take over the worl

(The is year 5425) 

Gleeb secret research facility 

(Dr Lomino) 

Just imagine microscopic worms that can process classified information and can relay that information back to a source 

Is a-sexual allowing it spawn more life forms of its self, and has the IQ of 205 And can breathe in space.. 

Experiment 524 can evolve and change the way we think we see our galaxy 

it has the ability to see trough thought waves and read minds allowing information to be processed from thinking it self 

it will live off the skin of a host, and can survive up to 5 years on surfaces without an organic food supply 

Giving it the leading edge in many ways, 

a perfect tool to spy on your enemies or competitors, 

and being pure organic it will sure make it hard to find 

Surely this would put the owner of the worms hive mind, the control unit of the information it process in full dominate control of the galaxy 

(High Inspector Rodger Martin) 
 
How long till we can get full production 
 

(Dr Lomino) 

I have everything thing we need to start give me 6 months and I can get 2 multiplex of them ready 

 
 

(High Inspector Rodger Martin) 

“And the hive brain that controls it all 

(Dr Lomino) 

Hive mind 6261a has been a full success shows no signs of failure all the information we received is true and very precise… but controlling its movements it’s… I have tried 

“Don’t worry, with a multiplex of these innocent little guys running around we will find the Pacific’s we need 

 
 

(6 months time) 

(Dr Lomino) 

We are ready to launch experiment 524, our pursuit to be the power house of the galaxy has just begun 

(High Inspector Rodger Martin) 

I hope these worms of your wont fail 

(Dr Lomino) 

They won’t 

 
 

(The worms are deployed across the galaxy secretly in suitcase’s canisters on commercial and domestic flights and were ever they can) 

 
 

 
 

(1 year after launch) 

(Dr Lumino) 

Everything that has been made is in our hands, we know the location of every bounty in the world not much longer we will shift the power balance in our favour 

 
 

(High Inspector Rodger martin) 

“The dream to have it all 

(Dr Lumino) 

What else is one to do than to browse through all will rather than the blank canvas you’ll would get from any search engine... 

(High Inspector Rodger Martin) 
 

Everything you wanted? 

(Dr Lumino) 

At the growth of 10 googolplex a day 

(High Inspector Rodger Martin) 

Ha hah ha…. These worms have shown us the whole world 

(Dr Lumino) 

What a world to discover

(High Inspector Rodger Martin) 

I can’t believe Exius i-1 spends most of its budget on time travel 

(Dr Lumino) 

They do have a lot already, there self-proficient ways to extended one’s life force was most amusing 

(High Inspector Rodger Martin) 

Eliupzium Corp has more money from farming and agriculture than half the galaxy combined they started everything 

(Dr Lumino) 

True but Delta-Hathiea there tec on AI- Nano- technology- weaponry and construction would be most useful 

(High Inspector Rodger Martin) 

Wezeral corporation are phocasing a lot of there work on a computer world you can enter, now that’s some interesting tec 

(Dr Lumino) 

There’s a secret facility on Joun that is trying to find new weaponry technology in the fields of Physics, Chemistry and botany, technology that will be most devastating to use 

(High Inspector Rodger Martin) 

we found it all 

(Dr Lumino) 

Yes and with my cross overs and all this technology and our new staff working night and day there will be enough Tec here to shift all the world’s results in our favour 

(High Inspector Rodger Martin) 

Everything is prosaically going to plan 

(Dr Lumino) 

But why stop there… 

The worms, they can be upgraded to have the ability of mind control, in the world of Zium Biological and organical upgrades I can upgrade them, make us have the control over another life form 

(High Inspector Rodger Martin) 
And I thought there wouldn’t be any more good news 
 

 
 

 
 

(2 years since launch) 

(High Inspector Rodger Martin) 
 

Our plans so far have completely come to order we are well on our way to be the biggest power in the galaxy we have made $20000 billion in such a short time 

(Dr Lumino) 

Experiment 524 has been quite a success look what we have achieved in 2 short years but there are no boundaries to our success and what we can accomplish 

(High Inspector Rodger Martin) 

If you’re talking about more ideas let me know I begging to hear anything new 
 

(Dr Lumino) 

No… no new news well there is always a new thought or two picked up by the worms but not of any use 

(High Inspector Rodger Martin) 

I guess the journey ends here 
 

(Dr Lumino) 

the journey has just begun why stop at money when we could be dominant, the true power of the galaxy take over everything and re write laws itself 

(High Inspector Rodger Martin) 

It’s always been on my mind 
 

 
 

(3 years since launch) 

(Tv news cast) 

The Gleeb Dictator Rodger martin has just announced that he has brought down the legal age of marriage to 15 and has also made illicit drugs legal, he has been a ruthless and judgmental leader but he’s role as head announcer of global industries stoke has just sky rocketed to $142530 trillion 

Making him one of the most if not the most powerful man in the galaxy 

(High inspector Rodger Martin) 

And all why not knowing of our devised plan 524 I could kiss you 

(And kisses the skin on he’s arm) 

(Dr Lumino) 

yes mind control is a powerful tool as an ally 

(High inspector Rodger Martin) 
 

thank you dr. thank you for..... 

(the TV channel gets taken over) 

 
 

(The Just) 

Dictator Rodger martin what you are doing is wrong and cruel your world will not survive while you at power, hand over yourself and lay down your arms we will not stand ideally by and do nothing if you do not except then expect war 

the federation of planets will not stand for your actions and either will we 

we are the just your life is on the line 

 
 

(High inspector Rodger Martin) 

If its is war they want, then its war they shall have 

 
 

 
 

(4 years since launch) 

(A line up of different federation of planet ships) 

(the Just leader Jin) 

The time has come, are you with me brothers, 

(The Just General Brieh) 
 
We are with you 
 

(Jin Launch’s first wave of troops) 

 
 

(inside the mother ship) 

(High inspector Rodger Martin) 

Is everything in order? 

(Dr Lomino) 

Everything is precisely going to plan, there attack will be pointless and futile 

(High inspector Rodger Martin) 

Good I trusted you this far, and you haven’t let me down yet 

(Dr Lomino) 

The time is now the Just will fall and the world will be in our total control 

As they fly in and take attack our mother ship I will launch no.5 it is a syszmic bomb, a bomb with the power of a 400556 kilometre blast that will only focus on enemy targets, while using the cloaking on our ships we will be safe 

We have to let the fight proceed for just long enough to fool them into full attack to draw them close enough to take out as many ships we can 

 
 

(The fight is taking place there is laser fire everywhere ships being blown up left right and centre it looks like the just are winning) 

(The just General Brieh) 

We are winning but we need more men, 

(the Just leader Jin) 

send in our final wave 

(Dr lumono) 

This is the time, launch no.5 boooooom ! eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeewwwwwww 

(High inspector Rodger Martin) 

hah! Look at that beautiful, all their ships in the proximity have been destroyed 

 
 

(Dr Lomino) 

Now that is over I want you to get them to sign this treaty it will make you Rodger Martin the president of the galaxy 

And Seeing how they have seen our power they it will be in their best interest to sign it they will have no choice, we are now dominate power of the galaxy 

 
 

(5 years, after launch) 

 
 

 
 

 
 

(High inspector Rodger Martin) 

Now that I have become the president of the whole galaxy I have released that I live in a state of fear, every day I remain in the shadows not livening freely as one would like it’s a curse 

(Dr Lomino) 

It is sad story isn’t it to not live amongst your own people must be hard on you and what your dreams are 

(High inspector Rodger Martin) 

Shut it up you don’t have this problem, you’re not the destroyer of the Just I am, they will find a way to kill me I know it 

(Dr Lomino) 

Talk has been going around even I would fear what you have done 

But the worms will pick up any response of an uprising you should be safe 

(High inspector Rodger Martin) 
 

I hope so for your sake, you are the one who made them sign that treaty putting me in full control of the galaxy 

(Dr Lomino) 

You’re the one who was changing laws in your favour and started a war 

(High inspector Rodger Martin) 
 

You insolent fool you should not be talking to me like that I am the president your ruler your god, your lucky I don’t kill you were you stand 

(Dr Lomino) 

I am sorry Rodger for what I have put you through, please except my apology I meant you no harm 

(High inspector Rodger Martin) 
 
You are excused for now 
 

 
 

 
 

(6 years since launch) 

(High inspector Rodger Martin) 

It has been a 2 years since I destroyed the Just I think I am safe, I know im safe all universe’s uprising have all been extinguished, but there were so many 

(Dr Lomino) 

I have to inform you 

That the worms have been showing signs of an unmoral response there seems to be interference in the hive minds relay core and we are not getting as much information as we would like 

(High inspector Rodger Martin) 

that can’t be, impossible, What does that mean 

(Dr Lomino) 

it means you should fear more than you think, 

(3 months later) 

(The Just leader jin) 

the time has come to hand, the rain of Rodger Martin will be no more he is an oaf and it is he’s time is running short, and good news has just been found 

we have found the truth behind he’s uprising in these microscopic worms 

These worms have been known to multiply and have spread across the galaxy they are smarter than you think and they relay information back to Rodger Martin and this is what has made him supreme 

And with this good news He’s terny will come to an end 

The time has come to rise up and take back what is ours and we will make him suffer for what he has done 

(on board Mother ship) 

(High inspector Rodger Martin) 

It has been another 3 months I am still alive the technology we have already found has kept my soul alive, I should have been more kind and just why didn’t I stop at being a dictator… I had… 

(knock, knock, knock, boom move in, move in,) 

(The Just leader jin) 

So we meet at last Rodger Martin you and your defences have held up so far but with the whole galaxy against you did not stand a chance, 

 
 

(High inspector Rodger Martin) 

You, you don’t scare me 

 
 

(The Just leader jin) 

It’s not me you should have been scared of 

(Dr Lomino) 

the worms that i have evolved have always been on my side the whole time and you Rodger the pawn of my plan, I had you under mind control the hole time it was just a matter of byding my time waiting for you Rodger Martin to take over the galaxy, you have done all the deeds I could of not and you will take the fall for me 

my worms could have worked on a lower IQ but I was far too greedy and wanted supreme power 

(The Just leader jin) 

For you a kind death is at hand I will flush your corpse into space for the rest of the Just to see who are just outside the ship waiting for me to turn you in and so you can die 

(Dr Lomino) 

Jin’s mind is mine as well he has also been a pawn of my plan if it wasn’t for jin I could not have taken the galaxy into my command and get the rest of the federation to sign my treaty 

Jin will tell the truth I forced him to say that I let him in to your chambers and was quite happy to do so 

and as of the worms the rest of the galaxy will not expect a thing I was the inventor not the destroyer and they will see me as there saviour and the worms mind control will never be known 

You should have known of your failure Rodger but I have had you under my control the whole time now take him away from me 

(Jin grabs Rodger Martin) 

(High inspector Rodger Martin) 

No no noooooooooooooooo! 

(Rodger Martin body gets flushed out into space) 

(Dr Lomino) 

I always wanted a beautiful world I’ve had such a good time 

(with a smile on Dr Lumino’s face) 

 

Author's Note

My First Short Story, though I think I changed the personality of Rodger Martin to early

Reviews

[JayG]

• Just imagine microscopic worms that can process classified information and can relay that information back to a source

The thing about sci-fi is that it must be reasonable according to known science. You can’t make up science. The detail doesn’t have to be accurate, just reasonable, and you fall off the table, so far as that, on line one, and keep on doing it with every line.

And: You don’t get to make up the rules of writing to suit yourself. Punctuation was invented to help the reader “hear” the writing the way you do. Leave it out, and/or misuse it and you shoot yourself in the foot. Spelling, too matters. Learning how to present dialog matters. In fact, the skills of writing fiction, which are NOT the same as what we’re taught in school, matter even more.

It seems to work when you read it because you know how to read it. An you know the setting, the background, and more.

So…I know it’s not what you hoped to hear, but it is the world we work in, so if you want to write fiction you need, first, to learn how.

Sorry, but since you’re spending time on this I thought you should know so you can start to fix the problem.

[Peachie]

cheers, i try put that on board, I was mainly going for dialog and I think I should add back ground setting info, this was my first every attempt to write a story