Forsaken Dream

Forsaken Dream

A Poem by Coll Silvermoon
"

When you abandon your dreams, but fragments still remain

"

Abandoned

Recurring

Strong

Obscuring


Fates

Twist

Rope

Wrist


Sense

Smell

Loud

Yell


Strength

Weak

Pure

Meek


What does all this mean

in your forsaken dream?

© 2014 Coll Silvermoon


Author's Note

Coll Silvermoon
Thank you for reading

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It seems those fragmants always remain my friend...nothing you can do to shake them free. Very cool.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coll Silvermoon

10 Years Ago

Thank you Jack. I always appreciate your down-to-earth approach on reviewing my work. It has helpe.. read more

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 Added on February 12, 2014
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Tags: Forsaken, Abandon, Dream, Poetry, Coll Silvermoon

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Coll Silvermoon
Coll Silvermoon

Dallas, TX



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I am an aspiring poet. I have enjoyed poetry for as long as I can remember. It was my favorite part of English / Literature in High School. I write what I feel into words, I also write about my env.. more..

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