daydreaming in IKEA as I watch all the couples pass me by, wishing someone would have me for a little while
Have me for a little while Til the lines take over and I’ll set u free To go younger But don’t let her be dumber
Have me Have Me! Because I could die tomorrow I’ve cheated death more times Than maybe I’ve been entitled to And just because you may be younger You could die sooner It’s true It’s happened. I’ve lost too many friends In their youth.
Neither of us should live with regrets We should laugh! Take bubble baths! We should be passionate about each other And life! We should check things off our bucket list Together.
Have me! You won’t regret knowing me! And when it comes time That I can no longer inhale breath I will feel healed from prior loss I will feel loved I will know and carry with me That you recognized my worth And I will rise above.
You will have lessons learned On what are the most important things in life On the brevity of it all The fragility And you will be stronger for knowing me You will feel loved unconditionally You will store my energy in your heart Because I will leave it with you When this body sets my spirit free
Have me for a little while Til the lines take over and I’ll set u free To go younger But don’t let her be dumber
'You don't want to get mixed up with me. I'm a loner, Dottie. A Rebel.' Lol jk
I don't know what to say, except I have loved and respected your poetic art for years that you've influence my work, as well...I love the flow...the genuine feeling of Lonliness and yearning...and the realities of aging...but don't go quietly in the night, Coco. ;)
Posted 7 Years Ago
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7 Years Ago
aw thanks Ev! I'm a lonely loner fo sho. thanks for your support! and yeah...I need to be less quie.. read moreaw thanks Ev! I'm a lonely loner fo sho. thanks for your support! and yeah...I need to be less quiet....Grrrrrr! haha
7 Years Ago
You are very welcome...Awww shucks, ayup, you should write more, Coco
So beautifully written. I feel like this piece put me into a moment that slowed time down and could see everything around me happening in slow motion, allowing me to take it all in. Amazing.
Posted 7 Years Ago
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7 Years Ago
Oh wow...thanks so much! So nice of you to leave me this comment. :)
'You don't want to get mixed up with me. I'm a loner, Dottie. A Rebel.' Lol jk
I don't know what to say, except I have loved and respected your poetic art for years that you've influence my work, as well...I love the flow...the genuine feeling of Lonliness and yearning...and the realities of aging...but don't go quietly in the night, Coco. ;)
Posted 7 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
7 Years Ago
aw thanks Ev! I'm a lonely loner fo sho. thanks for your support! and yeah...I need to be less quie.. read moreaw thanks Ev! I'm a lonely loner fo sho. thanks for your support! and yeah...I need to be less quiet....Grrrrrr! haha
7 Years Ago
You are very welcome...Awww shucks, ayup, you should write more, Coco
"The poet...is not nearly so concerned with describing facts as with creating images and establishing mental connections."
from the book "Uncertainty" by David Lindley
I'm in love with metaphors.. more..