the rain

the rain

A Poem by Colette
"

early morning thoughts

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6 A.M. and i gotta pee
i’m dangerously awake
tired, but can’t sleep
this body rests with 2 cats
on each side purring
 
i’m going crazy like only a poet can
these cats are my Prozac
only a man next to me will cure
my A.M. blues
my nighttime fever
 
if i had the quiet content
the loud activity
of a relationship
i wouldn’t be the poet i am
i wouldn’t have this ache, my muse
 
the lost souls
wouldn’t have me
to make them feel less alone
if only for the moments spent reading
my lonely verses
 
i’m feeling like Bukowski
minus the alcohol
like Neruda
minus the love
i’m part realist, part romantic
 
i’m thinking about the guy
with the turntable
how there was a thunderstorm
how he touched my arm
with one finger
 
the small things we remember
i wonder if anyone aches
with thoughts of me
if they remember small things
like my fingers
 
this rain
like little memories tapping
my brain
me, like a boat, ready to sail
i called him
 
he probably won’t call me
his life, probably pleasantly
moved on
like everyone’s does
except for mine
 
and this poem, flowing
is
my
babbling
brook

© 2013 Colette


Author's Note

Colette
Listen to the spoken word here: https://soundcloud.com/mzmoonshine/therain

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and this poem, flowing
is
my
babbling
brook "......


cole, theres an amazingly descriptive emotional creativness, combined with
a natural sense of yeaning, a stream of artistry flowing from the depth of mind,
as each word creates a sharp detail toward the overall image, waking thoughts
of life flood in at 2:00 am, now penned through the heart become a sparkling
poetical brook, truly, always a pleasure to read, thanks, peace, mike

Posted 17 Years Ago


Always enjoy your babbling brooks and this is no exception. Julian:)

Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautiful as ever my friend. ~Ev

Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Colette
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