The Villanelle is undoubtedly one of the most highly structured and complex forms of traditional poetry. When written well, the repetition fits the natural flow of ideas. Did it do so in this piece? Please leave an honest review. Constructive criticism is welcomed and encouraged.
This was inspired by the poem "My Darling Turns to Poetry at Night" by Anthony Lawrence. It's the most beautiful Villanelle I've ever read: https://www.poetryfoundation.org/poetrymagazine/poems/detail/89008
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Mr. Liston, this piece read itself to me the words soft and comforting. Peaceful rhythm joined the narrater moving with perfect ques. It ended to soon, I enjoyed this brief moment of peace and the belief that all was right in the world. Beautiful, Poetry. Thank you
Sheer Terror
Posted 7 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
7 Years Ago
Thank you for your kind words.
I'm glad you enjoyed.
I think You just wrote a wonderful Villanelle because honestly the repetition of " At night, when raging waves of day turn dead " and " she sleeps with starlight dancing in her head " fits perfectly with the meaning.
when I was reading your piece ,a feeling of comfort and beauty ovewhelmed me , yes , I felt Beauty inside and I don't know how , I guess your words and your style amazed me *-*
This is outstanding, truly !
Posted 7 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
7 Years Ago
Thank you for your heart-touching, encouraging words, Jess. I'm deeply honored to know this piece co.. read moreThank you for your heart-touching, encouraging words, Jess. I'm deeply honored to know this piece could affect you in such a way.
I personally am not well informed about Villanelle as a form of poetry. But, keeping my focus on the writing as a whole and the idea that is put, I am totally delighted by it. The words have done justice to the idea.
Good one from what I see. :)
Posted 7 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
7 Years Ago
I'm glad you enjoyed. Your words are greatly appreciated.
Mr. Liston, this piece read itself to me the words soft and comforting. Peaceful rhythm joined the narrater moving with perfect ques. It ended to soon, I enjoyed this brief moment of peace and the belief that all was right in the world. Beautiful, Poetry. Thank you
Sheer Terror
Posted 7 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
7 Years Ago
Thank you for your kind words.
I'm glad you enjoyed.
Oh my god, this is so beautiful! Easily my favorite poem today!
Posted 7 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
7 Years Ago
I know how much you love stars, Gullia ; )
Thank you for your kind words.
Glad you enj.. read moreI know how much you love stars, Gullia ; )
Thank you for your kind words.
Glad you enjoyed.
7 Years Ago
Oh, you know me well lol. Loved reading this piece :)
well look at this!!! One of my favorite forms!!..just loving this well written, beautifully expressed, wonderfully delightful imagery and just a feel good Villanelle!!! I see it all in my mind's eye!..."lady Luna"....ahhhhh lovely! write more please :-)
Posted 7 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
7 Years Ago
Hello Susan : )
Thank you for your kind words on this piece.
I'm glad you enjoyed.read moreHello Susan : )
Thank you for your kind words on this piece.
I'm glad you enjoyed.
7 Years Ago
I loved it! and i don't say that much!..or review much here...but this caught my attention!
I can see the transitions your poetry is going through. You wrote a Villanelle, i suppose it's undoubtedly a very riveting read. All over, it's well structured!
Unique and Original!
kudos!
Posted 7 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
7 Years Ago
Thank you for your kind words, Tazeen.
I'm glad you enjoyed.
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