I love foggy nights as well. On those nights, the nighttime reveals to us secrets it's been hiding in the sky during dusk. The fog reveals to us how the mist and the stars come out to play in the darkness. Very lovely descriptive poem. The way you look at the nighttime is truly beautiful. Very pleasant read William...I loved it!
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7 Years Ago
Thank you, Emily ... that's a wonderful way to put it : )
Made me remember my childhood and star gazing experience from terrace. Now it looks like too out of reach. Well done! Foggy nights and star gazing.. Love it!
I love foggy nights as well. On those nights, the nighttime reveals to us secrets it's been hiding in the sky during dusk. The fog reveals to us how the mist and the stars come out to play in the darkness. Very lovely descriptive poem. The way you look at the nighttime is truly beautiful. Very pleasant read William...I loved it!
Posted 7 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
7 Years Ago
Thank you, Emily ... that's a wonderful way to put it : )
As I was reading this , I saw fireworks and magical lights dancing upon your beautiful words *-* . I was imagining everything you said and I was bewildered ! I Love the way you conmbinated between the stars , the heart , freedom , fire ... And the way you described this " foggy night " made me love it more ( because I love foggy nights too ) . You know , You use some sorts of words , so deep and far-fetched that make me go seach for them in the dictionnary ( not only in this one but in all your writings ).I must say that I've learned a lot of vocabulary throughout your poems *-* .
I love it william , Fantastic Writing .
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7 Years Ago
Glad you could enjoy and relate to this poem, Jess.
Your uplifting reviews always make me sm.. read moreGlad you could enjoy and relate to this poem, Jess.
Your uplifting reviews always make me smile.
7 Years Ago
Yours too ! Really , they give me such a self-confidence !!! ^^
With technology and cell phone towers, it makes it hard to see those glorious constellations where I live. Favorite line: my heart is sharper than a raven's claw
pierced through stainless steel.
I enjoyed.
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7 Years Ago
To be honest, I rarely see stars at night either ... the night skies are usually starless where I li.. read moreTo be honest, I rarely see stars at night either ... the night skies are usually starless where I live.
Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Willam,
I enjoyed the imagery your words created. First a subtle change from enjoying natures spectacle to becoming part of it. I felt the change in emotions as the poem became more spiritual. Nice write.
Richie b.
It has been years since I have really gazed at the night sky. Your words have taken me back in time...when love was young and thoughts were wild...it was a time when I used to lie in the grass for hours on end and gaze at the stars.
Very beautifully written.
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