Cole: I really enjoyed it. Sometimes it is so true, exspectations are too high..Self Sabotage...Love is a tricky thing. Loved the Title, and the metaphor; great visuals. The first stanza pulled me right in, just beautiful and a great chorus too, noting that you write songs. Loved the line about ego, you've got that right. Too many ideas of the "perfect' relationship and you know, it just doesn't exist. They don't just fold up and cry, they waste time, and die searching for the soulmate, such a clique. Ending is very good also, To tear flesh from the bones of life that bleeds too easily, and you end up alone....No one is safe from betrayal, but too many people are jaded. Sorry, Cole, I'm sleepy, but still wish to tell you, I truly hope you continue writing. You're very talented and look forward to reading more. Thanks...Dale
Cole Son s a Poet, Songwriter and Screenwriter who's lived in Hollywood, California for twenty Five years as well as in Nashville Tennessee pursuing his songwriting and singing. Originally from South .. more..