Being Holy Doesn't Pay Very Well

The Holidays Aren't That Great Either.

Being Holy Doesn't Pay Very Well

Touring my eye, thrusted the rim of

The Divine -- As it laid a Fall-streak Hole 

Unsightly gorged by Fin-foots, tearing

though it every time they Fly -- 

Touring my eye, thrusted the edge of

The Virgin Sky -- As it laid like a Bible --

Gorged out, nesting a Fall-streak hole, ripped

from the Cover to the Back-Side. -- 

-- Cole Hayley, 2012 2013. 

do you have your

classical liberalism in check, sir?

Author's Note

I'm getting tired of returns.





here, ill throw you a tune.

Reviews

[SHEEMA HUQ]

I was antipating a scathing rebellious rant, yet instead, to my suprise I read something, subtle, visual and neat, well done

[Barbara Walker]

Funny, ironic, that's how I have been feeling lately, ripped from the cover to the backside. Thank you-I had the feeling, but not the words!

[Mockingbird]

i'm having trouble getting a handle on bible imagery. i do agree with the title. i guess you don't get what you had invested in return, and it's just a disillusionment in the end.

[Corset]

Maybe you're not doing it right? lol..jk , Did you see the capital "I" in the sky? I did, in the clouds, not an eye like one would immediately expect out of an I , But a actual "I" perfectly formed. I quit smoking that day, my body is a temple, lol...love this write Cole.

[Dayran]

A holiness that is on the way to self realization comes back to view itself as a friend in need. But we hope it'll stay for the duration thereafter, there is much we need to learn of holiness.

[Pax]

you always put me my mind in stirring emotions my friend...
your words are always so profound, your talented with words my friend..
about the last question...well i do check it on time to time bases even though i go on with the flow of life....great work my friend

[Kiari Sabon]

it was cool liked it

[Jazique]

Hmm interesting thoughts, you think it be okay if i show this to my creative writing club, i think they'd like the piece, its realky original. well done.

[Cole Hayley]

sure :), let me know what they think!