Half-Moon Bay

Half-Moon Bay

A Poem by Cole Hayley
"

im here again.

"

Half-Moon Bay:

Perched upon costal bedrock,

I lapse into the submergence

of ocean-voice. 

Jubilation coexists with the waves. 

All in ever-sense. 

Bliss had gone and approached -- far-left. 

Up along the sand dunes

and beneath the granite cloud. 

For a instance I heard its cry,

echoed from shore to

shore. 

© 2012 Cole Hayley


Author's Note

Cole Hayley
I havent published anything on this site for almost a month. I had a lot on my mind, especially with University and other things. I didn't really feel like writing a lot, but I'm feeling a little better about some things now. Still trying to find myself lately, but I'll post pieces as I get through it and try and publish alot more often. These few pieces are apart of a book I called "Poems From The Witching Hour", but they have no true order and It really is a broad collection. I wont be publsihing all the work I had written but Im getting back into it.

As for RR's I had over 200 of them, so I had to delete everything. Since I am back now I will be able to read more and more, please send them again, Ill get through them as fast as I can.

Thanks to all that review and leave comments, Ill review a piece of your work in return.

This is a pretty short one.



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Very fond of that line "all is ever-sense." When you can tune into nature, even briefly, it calms your spirit. Nice write!

Posted 12 Years Ago


If this is about Half-moon bay in California, then I think you perfectly captured the spirit of that place. I've been there several times and though I wanted to write something about it, I never did XD The imagery you used is really beautiful and I love the ending stanza. Anyway Glad to hear you will be writing more; I've been off for a while because of school too and I have 183 other RRs, will hopefully have time to read some.


Posted 12 Years Ago


Cole Hayley

12 Years Ago

Yup you got the place right. Its beautiful! I even think the song goes well with it.
Aarontastic

12 Years Ago

Yeah I couldn't get it to work before, but it is a lot more chill than I thought it would be.
This is absolutely beautiful. Your choice of words always amazes me. Lovely job.

Posted 12 Years Ago


A beautiful return Cole, something in this resonates it's short but it's as long as it needs to be.

Posted 12 Years Ago


this gives the ocean an even better lovely image. it's something to reflect upon, i never thought about the ocean this way. excellent piece.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Short and sweet. as always I love your diction, the words you choose are so fitting and never stale

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Cole Hayley

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