snowy drunken nights

snowy drunken nights

A Poem by Daniel Atkinson
"

see?

"
tack this one up
on a s**t-stained prison cell wall
amongst lovers' ashes and
snowy drunken nights
(what a pretty little
juxtaposition).

it hurts, hurts like
hell
to smile in spite of yourself.
believe me,
sugar:
i speak from experience.
because i've heard
every prophet and
every proverb
under the sun,
and i've yet to see
a soul.

© 2011 Daniel Atkinson


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This is a bit of prose to on someone's tombstone.

Cole, you put the "fun" in funeral.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Reads like Bukowski. Last stanza kills. Puts much on this site to shame.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I could reread this over and over again, just thinking about its meaning and the narrator...his life, his story. I love that kind of empty, world-weary, abrupt tone that's used in most of your poems.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I read this one over a few times and sat and pondered...........then bingo! You sing to me of your grace and yet you show it not.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on May 23, 2011
Last Updated on May 24, 2011
Tags: anger, bitter, dark, angry, sadness

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Daniel Atkinson
Daniel Atkinson

DULUTH, GA



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